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Gone Once Again
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Gone Once Again |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
Close your eyes to a wonderment That singles you out, from the Miriad of humanity that remains Close to the looking glass. Feel the soft sting of hope Giving you the power to reconcile The last moment you honestly Loved another person without pain. Not the kind of pain that Makes your heart feel alone When you you've only just Gone around the corner for a drink. The kind of pain that rips At your soul, withering your Resolve to continue on home Knowing it may have been your chance. Letting the tears stream down Covering your face like a new Skin, giving you the hope That your mind is truely gone. For if it still lays inside, Then why are you going away From the eyes you fell for days ago And the kiss you desperatly want again. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I think its important that we learn to have the capacity for love...if the other doesn't know how to love it is their loss...James |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is a great poem of yearning philosophy. I love this lead in.... "Feel the soft sting of hope Giving you the power to reconcile The last moment you honestly Loved another person without pain." The whole poem is a wonderful read! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Feel the soft sting of hope Giving you the power to reconcile The last moment you honestly Loved another person without pain. ===================================== The kind of pain that rips At your soul, withering your Resolve to continue on home Knowing it may have been your chance. Letting the tears stream down Covering your face like a new Skin, giving you the hope That your mind is truely gone. For if it still lays inside, Then why are you going away From the eyes you fell for days ago And the kiss you desperatly want again. ================================== Michael, I dont have the words to tell you how this one touches and effects me....... but Im placing it in my library and will keep it in heart as well. take care gentle poet of the wind jm I'm going crazy, I'm losing sleep. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
It is indeed a rarity to find a true love that washes away all the hurt that world once bestowed upon us, to cleanse are mind, heart and souls so we may see the ray of hope again. I think that everyone has searched for this kind of love at least once. Only some of us are lucky enough to find it. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen |
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