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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Meadow A meadow of winged monarchs and bloomed out purple withered upright faded to periwinkle iris I would bed with such color bogged and drowning green breezed with wild rose Listened stream of riffled rocks I am song too In the dew of little things, |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Martie....how you turn a phrase....this will fly high for quite a while with it's tenderness and charm.... |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ah, such gentle peace you put into my soul, this was simply so lovely. (love periwinkles too)! "Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MartieGal~ You come back singing ... as beautifully as when you left ~ Welcome home, honey~ I just know you had a marvelous time ~ Good to see you back~ Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Oh, indeed, I would, too! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'm not! I'm not going to listen to all the grammar critics! I'm going to think like Martie and bloom out all over.... This is Wonderful! Good to have you home! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
O yes, yes this is beautiful! sighh Martie  thank you for this wonderful feeling. Maree |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Martie...this meadows in the mind. A wondrous place. Bob |
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Soaringeagle Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 156CANADA |
martie even with out the camera these words paint a great picture well done and welcome home |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Martie, you are always a song..gentle smile |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is outstanding! "This rose has seen red, I have been blue |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
And sweet music you sing, Martie...sing for me anytime.... jwesley |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
 Martie's BACK!!! and she brought me BUTTERFLIES!!!! Missed you sweets.   I'm going crazy, I'm losing sleep. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Here's the thing...I went on this lovely vacation...took all these wonderful photos...only to find that I had no film in the .....camera. You may have to put up with my word photos instead. Thank you so much for reading and for such sweet responses! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
~shaking head~ how could you? LOL - lucky you're a remarkable poet isn't it??? So we get to read it instead of see it...hugs you...wonderful words as usual...  KI am a refugee of logic...insisting |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Your words are always photos. Thank you for this and it's so good to have you back home, sweet one. (((hugs)))Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Martie- beautiful, my friend! this is absolutely lovely. so happy you're back. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Martie: I can just imagine how frustrating it was to open that camera to nothing... but your words provide us with pictures and do so beautifully. *S* Missed you much! *S* |
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