Open Poetry #14 |
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Eyes |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Eyes If I could tell the immensity Of the stare, from deep within If I could hold you with intensity You'd understand my deepest pain I look at your beautiful eyes They tell me a million tales I see the tears so pure, I tremble My heart meets your stumble Never before have I seen such beauty As I climb the heights of my memory I do recall there was only one such I want not remember the depth of that touch For the pain of that loss, I want no repeat All I ask is that you understand my heartbeat I'll keep looking into these eyes For in them I see freedom, I see happiness You are the most beautiful, the most truthful I hold your hand in mine close to my heart And hope that this dream never elapses Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) [This message has been edited by Daniel J D (edited 06-27-2001).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
DJD~ I love it when you do romance...sigh.... "All I ask is that you understand my heartbeat" I love that......so beautiful ![]() |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Love for eternity...well written! |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Very lovely indeed Daniel..enjoyed.. ![]() ~Victoria~ ~ Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Love is timeless, Great poem. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Daniel...sigh....this is lovely |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh Daniel you always write the right words to touch my heart....love it. Charisma |
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