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Running In Tides
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Running In Tides |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
On sand shift feet that offer no footing or foundation... we ran the race for love and slipped as we sank ever deeper into each other then hell... Shell sliced heart cut by broken razor edge crustacions only trying to hide vulnerable soft bellies from harm.... we bled and were drained. Tides changed, high and low sunlight memories washed away as our love ebbed... and the sands once again showed no signs of our passing |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
I find myself holding my breath as my emotions were swept away by the underlying currents...the undertoe was fierce.... [This message has been edited by Decaflame (edited 07-05-2001).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this pulled...and tugged at my heart.... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Thanks Deca.. I always Appreciate what you have to say.. SEA.. it is from a time in my life when it tugged and pulled at mine as well. Thanks for the comment...it is greatly appreciated |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Ron: you are a metaphor meister. Very strong expression through a well-chosen comparison with the beach and its plethora of possibilities. -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Time and tide will wash all away in their path. |
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