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A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2001-06-27 11:00 PM





Shore to shore
I lay upon the sands
and leave an  imprint
of my soul
to be washed away
with the tide
as the sun lays
down upon the horizon

in the dawning of
a new day the sun
pulling up from  beyond
the whitecaps
lie upon the sands
as my soul
washes up
on the shore.

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

© Copyright 2001 Annie - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2001-06-27 11:20 PM


This is an excellent example of dark imagery....

well done!

VAS
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2 posted 2001-06-28 11:53 AM


Beautiful!

I love the "sun lays down upon the horizon."

ethome
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3 posted 2001-06-28 12:07 PM


Wonderful images here!  I don't think you've washed away poetically! I enjoyed the read very much!
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4 posted 2001-06-28 01:05 PM


nice images and like the cyclic turn to the poem... enjoyed the read a great deal!

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5 posted 2001-06-28 01:08 PM


WhispersCaress~
Such a lovely imagery of the ebb and flow of your thoughts.

My, my ... so well done.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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6 posted 2001-06-28 01:16 PM


closing my eyes. . .

a wonderful picture. . .  

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Victoria
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7 posted 2001-06-28 02:05 PM


lovely as always..

             ~Victoria~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

                                            Pablo Picasso


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Deep in the heart
8 posted 2001-06-28 02:06 PM


Haunting thought.  Of course, we need your soul to remain landlocked so we can enjoy more of your work therefrom
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