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You, me, him, and her . . . coupled senryus
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You, me, him, and her . . . coupled senryus |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I did not write this alone. A very special muse helped. ~*~ we find us alone ……………………….….. anticipation looking in each other’s eyes….. passion barely kept in check sharing each other …………..…….... eager lips melding ~*~ inescapable …………………………………….... not truly alone he and she ghost our presence ….. minds aware of the haunting intimidation ……………………………….… benumbed by our love ~*~ Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I would say... it is nice to have a muse to help.... I enjoyed both the differences and the similarities in these, which do well coupled |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
lucky muse......beautifully done  |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
When I grow up, I want to say IWIHWT.... lucky you....lucky muse! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Quite the muse! Humm very well done! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
WOW oh WOW oh WOWA rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Ron ~ Much appreciated approbation. From you a HIGH compliment indeed SEA ~ Thanx for being you Lady ~ Now you know how I feel when I read your work ... almost et ~ Hummmmmmm. Thanx my friend Titia ~ I heard that all the way over in Texas You make me blush and I thank you. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
so are you gonna tell who the muse is?!?! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah SEA....what Interloper has been gifted... only he should know! Well done, Sir...but then, did you really need a special muse....or are you just teasing all... for you do these so very well on your own! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ok Sunshine......you're right..... the only muse he needs is himself  |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wow! These are so wonderfully melded Interloper ... excellent amalgamation of sentiments, much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
very nice as always |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Pssst I was peaking there was a muse! Don't think he is telling though...This was great I loved it! "Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself." |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
SEA ~ Ok, I will tell you. My Muse has a first name, it's o-s-c-a-r and he has a second name, it's m-e-y-e-r NOT!Sunshine ~ Well, I dunno... Maybe I will start writing and give clues in each piece to see if y'all can figger it out... SEA ~ Oh, OK. Yeah, that's right. I never need a Muse or any inspiration at all. I am also asexual and can reproduce upon command Uh-oh, now I've got the poetry police interested... (Pssssst, gotta lay low for a while) Kit ~ Wow. That just melted me for sure Helen ~ Always? Mysteria ~ Shame on you! Yore not agonna squeal to the whole wurld are ya? What'll it take to buy ya off Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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