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0 posted 2001-06-27 04:18 PM


I did not write this alone.  A very special muse helped.

~*~
we find us alone ……………………….….. anticipation
looking in each other’s eyes….. passion barely kept in check
      sharing each other …………..…….... eager lips melding
~*~
   inescapable …………………………………….... not truly alone
he and she ghost our presence ….. minds aware of the haunting
      intimidation ……………………………….… benumbed by our love
~*~

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


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1 posted 2001-06-27 04:30 PM


I would say... it is nice to have a muse to help....

I enjoyed both the differences and the similarities in these, which do well coupled


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2 posted 2001-06-27 04:40 PM


lucky muse......beautifully done  
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3 posted 2001-06-27 04:41 PM


When I grow up, I want to say IWIHWT....

lucky you....lucky muse!

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4 posted 2001-06-27 04:44 PM


Quite the muse!  Humm very well done!
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5 posted 2001-06-27 06:17 PM


WOW oh WOW oh WOW

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

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6 posted 2001-06-27 06:38 PM


Ron ~ Much appreciated approbation.  From you a HIGH compliment indeed

SEA ~ Thanx for being you

Lady ~ Now you know how I feel when I read your work ... almost  

et ~ Hummmmmmm.  Thanx my friend  

Titia ~ I heard that all the way over in Texas    You make me blush and I thank you.

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7 posted 2001-06-27 07:33 PM


so are you gonna tell who the muse is?!?!  
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8 posted 2001-06-27 09:05 PM


Ah SEA....what Interloper has been gifted...

only he should know!

Well done, Sir...but then, did you really need a special muse....or are you just teasing all...

for you do these so very well on your own!

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ok Sunshine......you're right..... the only muse he needs is himself  
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10 posted 2001-06-27 09:50 PM


Wow!  These are so wonderfully melded Interloper ... excellent amalgamation of sentiments, much enjoyed!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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11 posted 2001-06-27 09:54 PM


very nice as always
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12 posted 2001-06-27 10:47 PM


Pssst I was peaking there was a muse!  Don't think he is telling though...This was great I loved it!  

"Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself."
~ Hopi ~

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13 posted 2001-06-28 10:34 AM


SEA ~ Ok, I will tell you.  My Muse has a first name, it's o-s-c-a-r and he has a second name, it's m-e-y-e-r   NOT!

Sunshine ~ Well, I dunno...  Maybe I will start writing and give clues in each piece to see if y'all can figger it out...

SEA ~ Oh, OK. Yeah, that's right.  I never need a Muse or any inspiration at all.  I am also asexual and can reproduce upon command
Uh-oh, now I've got the poetry police interested... (Pssssst, gotta lay low for a while)

Kit ~ Wow.  That just melted me for sure

Helen ~ Always?

Mysteria ~ Shame on you!  Yore not agonna squeal to the whole wurld are ya?  What'll it take to buy ya off


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


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