Open Poetry #14 |
To Feast On Dreams--inspired by Fallen Angel's "Unattainable"MY 3001TH POST, my 3000th must have been a reply. ;o} |
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Virginia Salter Today I feast on dreams as succulent as raspberries of a June morn, as warm as hot chocolate in mid-winter’s play as comforting as Grandma’s quilt warmed by the fire as soothing as her gentle hand stroking away a tear as exciting as the promise of a pet of one’s own as heart-fluttering as love’s very first kiss as soft to the ears as baby’s coo as sweet as lilac’s ambrosia as lovely as Mountain mirrored in the lake dotted with birds a-wing and cumulus threads glistening with sun’s refracted rays to feathery rainbow boas Scoffers may say, you are such a dreamer, pick up your bed and walk close your pad and place your pen in its sheath stop your dreaming, begin life, labor, do your share. . . but without dreams, there would still be caves and someone scratching two sticks of wood together just to hear their sound, nothing more © June 27, 2001 [This message has been edited by VAS (edited 06-27-2001).] |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Virginia, a beautiful poem. Congrads on the 3001 post. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Congratulations on 3000, Virginia....Passions is very fortunate to have you.... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Virginia, this is very nice. I was agreeing with you on the beauty of all the things listed, as I read. And congratulations on 3000. Sandra |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Happy 3000 ... and one |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thank you all!!! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
3001Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Virgina This is a lovely, creative and wonderfully flowing poem to celebrate your 3000th! Congratulations Take care, Melissa~ |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Congratulations on 3,000 Virginia! Wise and wonderful words to mark this terrific milestone, much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
add my congrats to this parade Virgina... heres to 3000 and one for luck lovely poem of hope and anticipation as well as full of imagery that your so good at. well done poetess I'm going crazy, I'm losing sleep. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Virginia- this is really very beautiful! really enjoyed it. CONGRATULATIONS ON 3000!!! hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Very beautiful piece Vas....congradulations! Nathan |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
fellow dreamers unite!! i loved the imagery..thank you for this... |
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