Open Poetry #14 |
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To Feast On Dreams--inspired by Fallen Angel's "Unattainable"MY 3001TH POST, my 3000th must have been a reply. ;o} |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Virginia Salter Today I feast on dreams as succulent as raspberries of a June morn, as warm as hot chocolate in mid-winter’s play as comforting as Grandma’s quilt warmed by the fire as soothing as her gentle hand stroking away a tear as exciting as the promise of a pet of one’s own as heart-fluttering as love’s very first kiss as soft to the ears as baby’s coo as sweet as lilac’s ambrosia as lovely as Mountain mirrored in the lake dotted with birds a-wing and cumulus threads glistening with sun’s refracted rays to feathery rainbow boas Scoffers may say, you are such a dreamer, pick up your bed and walk close your pad and place your pen in its sheath stop your dreaming, begin life, labor, do your share. . . but without dreams, there would still be caves and someone scratching two sticks of wood together just to hear their sound, nothing more © June 27, 2001 [This message has been edited by VAS (edited 06-27-2001).] |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Virginia, a beautiful poem. Congrads on the 3001 post. ![]() |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Congratulations on 3000, Virginia....Passions is very fortunate to have you.... |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Virginia, this is very nice. I was agreeing with you on the beauty of all the things listed, as I read. And congratulations on 3000. Sandra |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Happy 3000 ... and one ![]() |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thank you all!!! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
![]() 3001![]() ![]() Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Virgina This is a lovely, creative and wonderfully flowing poem to celebrate your 3000th! Congratulations ![]() Take care, Melissa~ |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
![]() ![]() Wise and wonderful words to mark this terrific milestone, much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
add my congrats to this parade Virgina... heres to 3000 and one for luck ![]() lovely poem of hope and anticipation as well as full of imagery that your so good at. well done poetess ![]() I'm going crazy, I'm losing sleep. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Virginia- this is really very beautiful! ![]() really enjoyed it. ![]() ![]() ![]() hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Very beautiful piece Vas....congradulations! Nathan |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
fellow dreamers unite!! i loved the imagery..thank you for this... ![]() |
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