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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2001-06-27 10:35 AM

“Do your dreams remember Pasts?”

Once a year,
I count age on my fingers,
My mind plays,
Back the days,
A slow count, must not linger;
Mark the times,
Thoughts reminds,
Each year the count grows higher,
One more year.

Untrimmed nails ragged prone to grime gathers,
These stiff wrinkled hands where quickness does flee,
Not supple freckles but spotted leather,
Each count an epicedium for me.

Gloom

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-06-27 10:38 AM

I liked this one

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

2 posted 2001-06-27 10:48 AM

relating.....

Sharon
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since 2001-06-04

Posts 53
Within a whisper

3 posted 2001-06-27 11:00 PM

Age is in the eyes...look at a really happy old person...look closely...their eyes are the eyes of a child....

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

4 posted 2001-06-28 05:27 AM

Thank you, Sea
Glad you liked.

Thank you, Lady in White,
Pleased you could

Thank you, Sharon,
I look in to old eyes everyday,
Many too old to remember the child
Now returned to infancy.

Gloom

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2001-06-28 05:36 AM

Another year slipped on by,
with memories still bringing tears
celebrating all those lies,
yet placed on forehead, a kiss this year.
The morning after he came to me,
forgotten too late, I have become.
Some day I shall remain in mind
and will be someone's number one.

Hope it was a good day for you,

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

6 posted 2001-06-28 05:47 AM

Thank you, Nakdthoughts,
A wonderful poetic response.
The day was like many others,
Almost Unnoticed and insignificant.
I’ve try to keep the tears limited to the count,
But it, as you know, keeps growing larger.

Gloom

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

7 posted 2001-06-28 07:14 AM

I too understand and relate all too well Professor Gloom ... you've captured these sentiments perfectly.

Best wishes,
/Kit

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