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The meek
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since 2001-06-22
Posts 16
Australia

0 posted 2001-06-28 01:28 AM


Your hands are the tools,
On the clay that you hold,
Spinning so freely,
As precious as gold,

So smooth and vulnerable,
Quite versatile too,
God is the creator,
God can be you.

We must read the lines before we read between the lines.

© Copyright 2001 The meek - All Rights Reserved
Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082
of Depression
1 posted 2001-06-28 05:39 AM


Very nicely done,
Simple yet passionate.

Gloom

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2001-06-28 06:09 AM


Simply done but very delightful to read...refreshing!
Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2001-06-28 07:01 AM


We can indeed mold and shape our destiny ... you've captured this very nicely, much enjoyed!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Cpat Hair
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4 posted 2001-06-28 08:52 AM


I enjoyed... a few lines to say a great deal..


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