Open Poetry #14 |
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A painful lesson |
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The meek Junior Member
since 2001-06-22
Posts 16Australia |
We must not be scared To hold on so tight To the ones that we love With all of our might I was in love once I was loved back too So many good times Our love was so true But as time passed by I started to fear That one day my love would just disappear So I ran away fast Not knowing why My love left behind I started to cry It later came clear That I was in strife For I couldn't live without The love of my life So I went back to her Only to see She was with someone else And she was happy So now I must live Never released from the maze Sad and lonely For the rest of my days Its a heart breaking lesson That I had to learn But I still have hope Some day she'll return We must not be scared To hold on so tight To the ones that we love With all of our might We must read the lines before we read between the lines. |
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Fancy Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 189TN/USA |
...well said...my experience comes from the flip-side of this... "...don't ever stop loving, don't ever stop believing, don't ever stop dreaming your dreams..." |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
So true, sometimes we don't realize the happiness we're holding till it's gone. Lesson number one: hold on tight if things are going well. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
lessons are hard at times... hope it works enjoyed the poem.. nice flow..and tell of story |
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Artistic Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 107Colorado/Rochester, NY |
A personal story well told and the simplicity adds to it beauty. Well written. ^_^ Welcome to Passions, (I know it's late... but I've been busy with college...!) I hope to see you around! --Artistic-- "Dreams are the touchstones of our characters" |
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