Open Poetry #14 |
Oasis |
Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I at first did seek shade and rest from glaring day but upon time and passing jest I in turn wished to brave desert sands, and feel the burn of sun and thirst Alas, to find the roots Had grown as I had slept And now it is with You I’m kept. Still the shade does cool And protects me from The start But nothing now it seems Protects this gentle heart. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh, this is lovely Cpat ... beautiful flow and sentiments, much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well....many thoughts ramble now in and around because of this one.... I shall have to ponder a bit before I exude with the bravos.... darn it, you've got me to THINKING..... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
That, I think is what we must guard against in any "good" relationship. Well done ... damn you are good! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Kit.. many, many thanks for the words.. they are appreciated Sunshine: it is with thought we grow... I do hope you enjoyed. Interloper: You are far far too kind... I am just a hack..who plays with words and images... but I do so thank you for your interest and many comments. |
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