Open Poetry #14 |
Let Me Be |
Maverick Wolf Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 94Scandia, MN |
You won't lose your dignity Let me give you your pride Only you can free yourself Let show you the way The sun will rise tomorrow Let me make it shine You won't stop caring Let me love you forever |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
very nice |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
to is very good nice write A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
You won't lose your dignity Let me give you your pride Only you can free yourself Let show you the way The sun will rise tomorrow Let me make it shine You won't stop caring Let me love you forever ================== Do that would you?.......... I so loved your poem .........so touching. Thank you....... *********************************** It's only me.......only me |
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Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
If only it were not filled with love. I did like the write, though. Nice piece. "We also know how cruel the truth often is, and we wonder whether delusion is not more consoling."- Henri Poincare (1854-1912) |
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