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Maverick Wolf
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0 posted 2001-06-26 06:04 PM



You won't lose your dignity
Let me give you your pride
Only you can free yourself
Let show you the way
The sun will rise tomorrow
Let me make it shine
You won't stop caring
Let me love you forever

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1 posted 2001-06-26 06:13 PM


very nice  
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2 posted 2001-06-26 06:15 PM


to is very good
nice write

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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
3 posted 2001-06-26 06:17 PM




You won't lose your dignity
Let me give you your pride
Only you can free yourself
Let show you the way
The sun will rise tomorrow
Let me make it shine
You won't stop caring
Let me love you forever
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Do that would you?..........

I so loved your poem  .........so touching.

Thank you.......
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It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

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Through the Looking Glass
4 posted 2001-07-21 02:16 AM


If only it were not filled with love. I did like the write, though.

Nice piece.

"We also know how cruel the truth often is, and we wonder whether delusion is not more consoling."- Henri Poincare (1854-1912)

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