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Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2001-06-26 11:17 AM

Outstretched hand

~*~

midpoint of palm’s grasp
feel the warm with which it clasps
then the breath of gasp

~*~

safe it holds one’s soul
my heart, there, in her soft hand
how does she do this?

~*~

never to feel again
too far gone in life, then love
breathed in me again

~*~

remarking in sigh
articulates same to me
outstretched hands entwine

~*~

write with grace, all others lose face;
"Jo was very tall, thin, ... and reminded one of a colt..." LMA

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2001-06-26 11:36 AM

Lady,
Out streached hand can catch many things. *L*

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

2 posted 2001-06-26 11:43 AM

Indeed, Sy....they do....thank you, Sir....

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

3 posted 2001-06-26 11:52 AM

really remarkable work...

Regards O Lady in White,
Sudhir

"I was born intelligent - education ruined me"

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2001-06-26 12:05 PM

hands enfold the heart
lovely, sacred offering
protected by two

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-06-26 12:43 PM

LadyInWhite~

'then love
breathed in me again'

Says it all, dear poetess~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

JLR
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since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

6 posted 2001-06-26 01:04 PM

Wow, I really liked these...everyone of them! Thanks!

bslicker

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since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

7 posted 2001-06-26 01:20 PM

Wow, hand reaching,
Good write

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

[This message has been edited by bslicker (edited 06-26-2001).]

MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

8 posted 2001-06-26 01:43 PM

remarking in sigh
articulates same to me
outstretched hands entwine

......outstretched hands can reach far within one's soul.....just as your words did.

Thank you Lady.....
*************************

It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

Gemini
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since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

9 posted 2001-06-26 01:52 PM

Very lovely, to hold heart in hand, sweet words.

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

10 posted 2001-06-26 02:18 PM

An outstretched hand is always a sign of welcome. It means there is a heart in need of nourishment. Well done, Lady.

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the human mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

11 posted 2001-06-26 03:41 PM

Very very well done! Good reading all the way through!

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

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British Columbia, Canada

12 posted 2001-06-26 03:49 PM

This is a keeper, oh yeah! Lovely.

"Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself."
~ Hopi ~

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

13 posted 2001-07-09 02:35 PM

So many of you came in to read this, I want to thank you all, and am short of time...

so please know...as many of us do, I write for you...

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