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Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2001-06-07 03:03 PM

Calm

this is the calm of you
this quiet time
when your head comes
to its favored spot
and rests

this is the calm of you
this touch
when your lips rest
on a blessed spot
and sups

this is the calm of you
this feel
when your fingers claim
their desire
and tingle

this is the calm of you
just before
your eyes greet mine
and passion
burns

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2001-06-07 03:07 PM

Romantic and openly warm and affectionate! That's where the youth of love resides and can never be discouraged! Very well done!

azblond
Senior Member

since 1999-07-01

Posts 637
The Steamy Desert

2 posted 2001-06-07 03:11 PM

Beautiful...I loved it!

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

3 posted 2001-06-07 03:12 PM

...
"this touch
when your lips rest
on a blessed spot
and sups"...

Soft and sensous. Beautifully penned.

Poeminister

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2001-06-07 03:14 PM

If that is calm, I'd be interested in seeing the passion burn. My God.

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

5 posted 2001-06-07 09:48 PM

WOW! oh WOW!

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite

since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

6 posted 2001-06-07 11:01 PM

Absolutely beautiful LIW...the feeling of
this is perfectly serene, you've woven a
beautiful tale of "calm"~

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

7 posted 2001-06-08 08:30 AM

very tender and filled with underlying passion... excellent work.. one I enjoyed greatly

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-06-08 12:59 PM

wow. . . I love this moment. . .

just wonderful. . .

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Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

9 posted 2001-07-09 03:03 PM

I see that you all remained quite calm and peaceful over this one. I commend you, one and all.

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