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Petite Point Applique |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Repost: Petite Point Appliqué Wind that whispers in the night Secrets of a rose Silver crested clouds in flight Visions that impose Shadows dancing lunacy Round a maypole log A moon that lights fantasy Bull frogs in a bog. Adding songs of interplay Passing through my ear Songs that sing and seem to say Don Quixote’s here The sweet smell of earth just turned Rising from the mist The suns golden rays returned All beyond resist Passing through the wind that’s there Carried softly in the air. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Enjoyable imaegs and flow... glad you reposted..I would have missed otherwise. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Now ya know I love this!!!! There's just something about a maypole log that makes me all goosebumpy!  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well if we are going to be allowed to pick out favorite lines.... "The suns golden rays returned All beyond resist..." YES! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I'm with Karilea ... what a wonderful phrase that is ... beautiful poem Sy, very nicely written!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
This poem is alive. "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Wind that whispers in the night Secrets of a rose Silver crested clouds in flight Visions that impose ========================= The sweet smell of earth just turned Rising from the mist The suns golden rays returned All beyond resist Passing through the wind that’s there Carried softly in the air. ======================== well who could resist this beauty...not I... your gift for subtle, understated, succinct imagery is showcased in this piece so few words used, yet such vivid images painted for our minds eyes... yer just so cool  *winkiewinkie* and me tired puter wont let me find a good Maypole pic to match this pretty poem  but i found this cute painting for ya later-color my world-gator  me |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
James, Your pleasure is my pleasure. Thanks for the read. Cpat Hair, Big thanks. Serenity, Yea, croaking frogs. *L* Sunshine, Yes that makes sense. *L* Kit, Always enjoy your comments. RSWells, Thank you. JM, That's a gread picture, I just turned all the people to frogs. Winkiewinkie Stinky |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'Adding songs of interplay Passing through my ear Songs that sing and seem to say Don Quixote’s here' You make music with your verse - and then dance across the page. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~/b> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I always love to see "bullfrogs in a bog" included in a poem...and your french has never been better! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, You say the nicest things. LOve and Kisses Balladeer, Bull frogs in a bog has such a nice ring to it. Thanks for the read. |
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