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Silent Film
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Silent Film |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Silent Film The picket fence may still perfect Our insight on domestic life. For black and white in some respects Inherently project the strife Of time and space, both relative To forward motion, lovely still Despite the lack of sound, progression Rocks, retired, without commotion, Content with legs and flicks of notion. RMW |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You leave me speechless....but I'll be back.... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done!! as usual you leave me pondering what in all you have said or could say..did I miss.. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Even though this one is about a media without sound...it shouts volumes to me, and I listen with a smile! Nice work here!!!  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Hmmmm. I will have to think about this one. Seems to be some gray area here  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Gads, I'm back. The image of an old b&w home movie keep coming to mind, the flickering and of course, unsure hand of the filmographer....all legs on the screen, thinking we have the whole picture in front of us....and the noise of the motion picture as the reel takes the film round and round...clicking....clicking.... I'm just waiting for the lightbulb to go out as they always did.... VERY good, RMW.... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bob--Sometimes in silence you can hear more. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Awesome writing, Bob. You've captured life so well here. Cor |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
This is really impressive. I could picture what you were saying in B&W. Really a different concept. Betty Lou Hebert |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
what Cpat said, for certain |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you just take these small pictures of life, but yet you say so much with them . . . well done. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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