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White Sand Glitter (bit of mischief from me to PdV)
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White Sand Glitter (bit of mischief from me to PdV) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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not a single taper lit. Darkness be reality- stumble in blind man’s remiss. the cast of me from deep shadow. Just the silent mimicry-- Habit moves what I believe… Every step that we misstep becomes the drama’s misery. Follow footprints of regret while prancing tide’s eternity; each step impressed upon the shore. Footprint left in search of more- hopes compressed and washed away— I knew that it would end this way. drag out to sea the gifts I thought were just for me. Leaving just a sparkle’s dust- a land of thousands—bits of lust-- as the moon pulls back the tide in kiss of sun in golden rise. On the beach… Sparkles every spark of me. Oh see what you can do to me? Leaving rock in blush of pink… Kiss me? Won’t you? Kiss me? Please? Leave one shell upon the beach. Just one thing to cleave my ear, remembering that you were here. [This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 06-26-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
well...sharon? I totally screwed up the title...but dammit? grin...got back on line...ROFLMAO...FOR NOW...sigh |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
And like a good friend, I fixed your mistake!!! Cool poem..and I'm glad you fooled the internet jinxing fairy!  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LittleMissMischief~ I adore this ! ! 'Leave one shell upon the beach. Just one thing to cleave my ear, remembering that you were here.' Yeaaaaaaaahhhhh ~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
thanx to s.o.s. and m.o.m.s. I guess it's gonna be a long goodbye for this one...HUGS to both me special ladies!!! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
"Just the silent mimicry-- Habit moves what I believe… Every step that we misstep becomes the drama’s misery. Follow footprints of regret while prancing tide’s eternity; each step impressed upon the shore. Footprint left in search of more- hopes compressed and washed away— I knew that it would end this way." Sad but so beautifully written Celeste! I don't know what the other problem was but I sure enjoyed what I read here! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
You know what? Lately, when I get one of my few poetic ideas, I get on here and someone has done it so much better! Sheesh, I am getting worried  OK, I have to quote on this poem "hopes compressed and washed away— I knew that it would end this way. Watch the tide drag out to sea the gifts I thought were just for me. Leaving just a sparkle’s dust- a land of thousands—bits of lust-- as the moon pulls back the tide in kiss of sun in golden rise." So exactly what I would have said to someone, if he would have listened. You said this so beautifully, I am truly glad I read this even though it was for Sharon LOL Serenity, I love this poem. In every way. Though I now want to go back to the ocean and cry a little. Sandra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, Your still peeling away the rind the sweet is yet to come. Good write, enjoyed |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Follow footprints of regret while prancing tide’s eternity; each step impressed upon the shore. Footprint left in search of more- hopes compressed and washed away— I knew that it would end this way. Watch the tide drag out to sea the gifts I thought were just for me. Leaving just a sparkle’s dust- a land of thousands—bits of lust-- as the moon pulls back the tide in kiss of sun in golden rise. =============================== Do you ladies charge a fee to read minds and mirror hearts *sigh* beautiful write of imagery and emotion me girlies. I'm going crazy, I'm losing sleep. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
this poem is so fantastic! Not at all what I expected from your lead in, but far from disappointed. My favorite section is this one: Habit moves what I believe… Every step that we misstep becomes the drama’s misery. Follow footprints of regret while prancing tide’s eternity; each step impressed upon the shore. Footprint left in search of more- hopes compressed and washed away— I knew that it would end this way. ~~~~~ You do such wonderful shtuff!!! |
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