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| Open Poetry #14 |
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Whatever Is |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Whatever Is As morning light puts out the night And dewdrops shower early morn. I rub the dreams to natural sight And watch the golden shafts of dawn. I listen to the wind instead Whispering all the early noise The birds nearby that have not fled The ones that watch and wait in poise I smell the odors of new birth The flowers lifting up their heads The seeds that burrow through the earth The perfume that the breeze has spread I feel the power of the sun The chill is gone and warmth is here. I think on all this life begun And weigh my thoughts of interfere. But why do I think interplay? If I’m but a part of the day |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
It's great we have a choice. We can observe or participate. Maybe put in store some birdseed. Good morning poem. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RSWells, But that is the question I pose. THank you for the read and comment. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
As morning light puts out the night And dewdrops shower early morn. I rub the dreams to natural sight And watch the golden shafts of dawn. I listen to the wind instead Whispering all the early noise ========================== The seeds that burrow through the earth The perfume that the breeze has spread I feel the power of the sun The chill is gone and warmth is here. I think on all this life begun And weigh my thoughts of interfere. But why do I think interplay? If I’m but a part of the day ============================== Well, you are definately part of MY day.... sunshine on me shoulders  love the imagery and soul of this Stinky... sincere intend wrapped in rhyme and a respect for the things that are bigger than all us.  me  I'm going crazy, I'm losing sleep. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Enjoyed the poem, it painted a nice picture for me of the morning, thought maybe you could have done a little more with the last line to tie it in. Just a thought, great work. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Which Sea Gull is you and which is me? Thank you Tinker Bell LOve Ya. Rick, I think your right, thanks for the read. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Youre the one with the better tan LOL you know...all that wisdom glowing gold *L* (or wait..is it from golfing in the sunshine state) *winkiewinkie* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Kisses and hugs from Seymour Sea Gull. Winkiewinkie Stinky |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This is such a wonderful way to say Good Morning, my friends.. Regards Sudhir "I was born intelligent - education ruined me" |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
What a wonderful read, the images are extremely vivid, I especially like the line: I rub the dreams to natural sight |
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illusion Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296 |
This is a lovely wakeup of wondering.  |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
But why do I think interplay? If I’m but a part of the day ====================== Oh......what a question? I wonder if we'd ever find the answer..... I enjoyed this one .......the images you paint is beautiful...... Thank you *************************** It's only me.......only me |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Interesting, such a pretty, visual poem, with a big philosophical question at the end. I never feel completely part of any of it, but this one makes me want to try to appreciate the morning more. Sandra |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'I smell the odors of new birth The flowers lifting up their heads The seeds that burrow through the earth The perfume that the breeze has spread' Thank you .. I approach each morning with refreshing awareness of something new ~ Sometimes it lies upon the lawn ~ Sometimes it lies in me ~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, Good morning my friend. VAS, Thank you for the read and nice comment. Illusion, Thank you for the read. Enchanted, Glad you caught the last couplet. Catalinamoon, You got the point. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, We crossed, but I understand what you said. Hugs and kisses back. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading your poem Seymour...James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I "almost" missed this....almost, but not quite.... so am very appreciative for the smiles it gives me as I go about to interplay my day.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
James, Your pleasure is my pleasure. Thanks for the read. Sunshine, Enjoy your interplay. *L* |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Vandana, Thanks. |
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