Open Poetry #14 |
My Shadows |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
My Shadows shadows shrink they grow back and forth with flow most disappear in day light but some stay way after midnight creeping through cracks of walls patiently waiting for your call there when you do not see yet, close they are to me I am never alone shadows make that known always with heart and hand of care forever to remain there Helen Slicker |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
yes,it is time to call. nice write. A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. Bernie Slicker [This message has been edited by bslicker (edited 06-26-2001).] |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Helen....Nicely done....and an interesting subject. Bob |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yet, close they are to me I am never alone shadows make that known very nicely done... always do enjoy reading your words... What are these things that are chasing me it seems a shadow could it be following me from here to where someday you'll know my heart does care But till then when your eyes do open this shadow chasing is my way of coping |
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g-hm Member
since 2001-05-16
Posts 85 |
Good poem, glad to see you back doing such nice work. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it I always enjoy reading your poetry |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the shadows will always be there. . . wonderful. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Shadows linger....... Shadows......we know they are there Yet.....we stare .........we pray for them to go away Lovely........and made me bit uneasy as I must confess the gloom I feel with shadows though they could be real. Thank you ****************************** |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
I am never alone shadows make that known always with heart and hand of care forever to remain there Some shadows aren't sinister...wanting only that you know they'll always be there for you. I hope it's these you write of. Well done! And, btw...nice to see a lady always finds a way. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
yes they are the ones ....ty.....these are the "best" kind...helen |
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