Open Poetry #14 |
Calming Thoughts |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
When life becomes too hectic And my troubles are more than few There's one thing that brings me comfort When I close my eyes and think of you I search my mind for the end of the rainbow A place that always gives me such a lift Amongst this treasure I'm sure to find Your love which is truly a gift How the sun warms my heart On a cold Winter's day The beautiful song of a bird So easily takes my cares away The brilliant blue of the sky I see reflected in your eyes The golden glow over the land As the sun begins to rise Many images of you I see From the kaleidescope within my mind I reach inside this myriad of colors And leave my dark depressing thoughts behind Suetang |
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Fandaen Junior Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 47Ft Worth, Texas |
very nice. I wish my writings flowed so well |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
How lovely Sue, and don't memories give us such comfort when we need them the most? Just lovely, and you are getting just soooo good! "Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SueTang~ 'The brilliant blue of the sky I see reflected in your eyes The golden glow over the land As the sun begins to rise' To see the new day in another's eyes is just the grandest thing. Lovely expression. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Ah the comfort of such memories......I really liked the way this flowed down the page ....good work! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all so much for your kind, encouraging words, they are so much appreciated. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Fancy Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 189TN/USA |
...sitting here reading you reflect my thoughts so nicely... "...don't ever stop loving, don't ever stop believing, don't ever stop dreaming your dreams..." |
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