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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-06-25 09:01 PM


When life becomes too hectic
And my troubles are more than few
There's one thing that brings me comfort
When I close my eyes and think of you

I search my mind for the end of the rainbow
A place that always gives me such a lift
Amongst this treasure I'm sure to find
Your love which is truly a gift

How the sun warms my heart
On a cold Winter's day
The beautiful song of a bird
So easily takes my cares away

The brilliant blue of the sky
I see reflected in your eyes
The golden glow over the land
As the sun begins to rise

Many images of you I see
From the kaleidescope within my mind
I reach inside this myriad of colors
And leave my dark depressing thoughts behind

Suetang

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Fandaen
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1 posted 2001-06-25 09:05 PM


very nice. I wish my writings flowed so well
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2 posted 2001-06-26 02:03 AM


How lovely Sue, and don't memories give us such comfort when we need them the most?  Just lovely, and you are getting just soooo good!

"Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself."
~ Hopi ~

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3 posted 2001-06-26 05:05 AM


SueTang~

'The brilliant blue of the sky
I see reflected in your eyes
The golden glow over the land
As the sun begins to rise'


To see the new day in another's eyes
is just the grandest thing.
Lovely expression.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
4 posted 2001-06-26 05:34 AM


Ah the comfort of such memories......I really liked the way this flowed down the page ....good work!
Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia
5 posted 2001-06-26 06:13 PM


Thank you all so much for your kind, encouraging words, they are so much appreciated.  Take care......Sue

Suetang

Fancy
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since 2001-06-05
Posts 189
TN/USA
6 posted 2001-06-27 03:11 AM


...sitting here reading you reflect my thoughts so nicely...

"...don't ever stop loving, don't ever stop believing, don't ever stop dreaming your dreams..."
Warmly...
Fancy

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