BEST PART OF ME (for those who requested it)

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redwriter1
Member

since 1999-07-22

Posts 480
Franklin, TN

0 posted 2001-06-26 12:01 PM

I posted....... THE BEST PART OF ME a few weeks back. Thank you all for your replies and heartfelt responses.

As requested, I finally have the audio up at www.mp3.com/kaylynn if you would like to hear the real thing.

Any comments would be greatly appreciated.

If I ever had to choose, between life and lovin you
I know where my heart would stand
and if I ever had, everything to lose
I'd put it all right in your hands

Cus everything you've done for me
and all that you are
is more than I could ever hope to be
look into my eyes, you can see, read my mind
You're the best part of me

If you ever have a doubt, we can talk it out
I want you to know I'm here
I can take the tears, you can cry outloud
you've got nothing to fear

CHORUS

You can hold the love inside
Baby I can see you're trying
there's something you wanna say
Don't let me get in your way
I'm on your side

If you think you're gonna fall
when your back's against the wall
hold on to me, I'm strong
Nothing you would you ever say
could make my heart turn away
I'll be with you through it all

CHORUS

[This message has been edited by redwriter1 (edited 06-26-2001).]

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2001-06-26 12:16 PM

OH THIS IS SO COOL!!!
and Im sooo bummed cuz my raggety old comp wont let me download the tunes...but i will try and hear it on another comp...
CONGRATS on having your own CD girl...
very very cool...youre on your way

I'm going crazy, I'm losing sleep.
I'm in too far, I'm in way too deep over you.
You'll always be the one.
You were the first, you'll be the last.

redwriter1
Member

since 1999-07-22

Posts 480
Franklin, TN

2 posted 2001-06-26 07:28 AM

Thanks for the kind words! I hope you find a computer soon (grin)

Fancy
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 189
TN/USA

3 posted 2001-06-27 03:17 AM

...this is great!...just as all your writings...

"...don't ever stop loving, don't ever stop believing, don't ever stop dreaming your dreams..."
Warmly...
Fancy

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2001-06-27 03:27 AM

Very nice song Redwriter...James

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2001-06-27 07:37 AM

I write hundreds of lyrics and I think these are very good! Nice meter and flow and I can use my imagination to create a melody to the words!

redwriter1
Member

since 1999-07-22

Posts 480
Franklin, TN

6 posted 2001-06-27 07:39 AM

Another lyricist in our midst? (smile) kewl!

I would enjoy reading some of yours.
I hope you listen to the melody at mp3.com and tell me what you think.

Thanks!

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