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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
The day has ended and darkness has decended A quiet time, a repair time until the sun will shine The prayers said, thoughts all turn to sleep and bed The day was long and tomorrow we can right all wrong When I'm in between awake and sleep ready to dream All the days worries at rest no longer to hurry The peace of all men I pray and wash away my sin Show me what I need to do to others a good deed |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
a lovely prayer of a poem.... enjoyed this very much... "When I'm in between awake and sleep ready to dream" loved those lines especially! nice job!  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
well..it looks like youre halfway there.. good intentions is a great place to start... hopefully you went beyond between and got some sleep... Our Mother Earth and her infamous insomnia... at least you put the awake time to good poetic use well done ME |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
doreen peri, thank you . Glad you like it Janet Marie, WRONG!! No sleep last night, but there is always hope for tonight. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MotherEarth~ Lovely prayerful thoughts ... A little 'Marge' philosophy ... 'Sleep comes when we need it ... not when we want it !' Throw out the clock ... and let each moment of awake tick you forward. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Marge, you are so right! Last night I read, I wrote, I really tried not to let my mind wander too far out in left field and when I finally got out of bed, I felt rested. I am starting to whind down, but will wait to see what the night brings. Thanks for your advice. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Oh my, this needs another look at. Lovely lovely lovely Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Amen ME. . . well done. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Titia, thank you Sven, and I thank you, also |
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