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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-06-27 02:42 AM



Much Applause
~*Marge Tindal*~

There we were on AOL
Swapping stories
Raising a little ..
(well, you know)
When in popped Dawn
and just like that
Mysteria, she began to clap !
That set Vicky off
One - Two - Three
Left me wondering
what could this be ?
Oxymorons shaking hands
biggest shrimp in the land ?
I tried to get it - I really did
but Dawn just wanted to stay hid
So we clapped
'til she came back on
Loobie - Loobie
Shame on Dawn !  

Four renegades chatting
Oh, what fun !
Didn't get another thing done !
Another night - another time
Thank ya' gals ...
Now let's rhyme !


Well, I couldn't very well call it The Clap, could I ?

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Logan
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1 posted 2001-06-27 02:48 AM


oh my stars, now you have ME laughing at this late hour..enjoyed Marge and the rest...very gentle smile
vlraynes
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2 posted 2001-06-27 02:49 AM



ROFLMAO!!!!!    

Marge, my silly friend...you're too much!! LOL

I knew there was a reason I didn't go
to bed yet!!! LOL  
I just had a feeling you'd be back
here with something before the
night was over...and this is a doozy!  

Yes...it definitely was a fun time!!  
Can't wait to chat again!  

You KNOW I'm loving every word
of this one!  

You don't think 'The Clap' would
have worked, huh? LOL  

Love ya, friend,
Vicky



"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes





[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 06-27-2001).]

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3 posted 2001-06-27 03:07 AM


Well they do have the biggest shrimp I have ever seen in my life in Texas, honest!  And it was a possum thingee in the garbage, I remember now!  Oh, dear lady you are too much...chew it up them words, spit them out, in a flash, a poem is born!  Yes that was fun, and we should waste some time again, but I sure didn't get a darn thing done tonight, and it was well worth it!  Love ya, ya crazy nut!  

"Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself."
~ Hopi ~

ethome
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4 posted 2001-06-27 06:55 AM


That's quite the poetic quartet Marge!  I can envision the scene clearly......I got quite the chuckle when I read this.....Light hearted and well written poem!
Martha Cowan
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5 posted 2001-06-27 07:04 AM


I am CRACKING UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Texas apologies for missing most of the party...it was thunderstorming here in more ways than one ~*~smile~*~...but, hey...that was one heck of a party, and I can't wait to do it again soon!  Thanks for the smiles awaiting me, what a wonderful way to begin the day!  This was ADORABLE!!!!!!!!!!
Hugs and smiles right back at ya....
Dawn


Kit McCallum
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6 posted 2001-06-27 07:05 AM


It sounds like a fun time was had by all, much enjoyed Marge!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2001-06-27 08:13 PM


Logan~
You think it was LATE for YOU ???
Those girls had me laughing until darn near sunrise here in Florida !
THREE hours earlier FOR THEM ! !

Vicky~
LOL !
My sides are splitting with laughter.
You guys double-teamed me ...
Whoops ... tag-teamed with Dawn as the occasional back up member !

Mysteria~
There ya' go again ! !
Oxy Oxy Moronic !  LOL !

ETHome~
Oh my !
Quartet yes ... poetic ... I don't thinkkkkkkkk so !

Dawn~
Glad you got a giggle out of it !
Loobie - Loobie  

Kit~
We did have fun ...
and they are a hoot !
Wore me out ! !  
LOL ... we'll probably do it again !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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