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Fandaen
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0 posted 2001-06-24 08:35 PM



The Hardest Words to Say

When you meet someone special, that one that catches your eye.
You look at her and your heart skips a beat, and your mouth goes dry.
And though you try to deny it, there’s more to the warmth that you feel,
Than the heat of the sun in the sky.

You feel so good when you’re together, and feel emptiness when you’re apart
But what is this you’re feeling, these feelings of the heart.
She’s in your dreams, and in every waking thought,
You can see her when you close your eyes, you know she’s in your heart.

When you want to tell her how you feel the words don’t come clearly
Except for the songs on the radio that say things so well
But there is more than just lyrics to what you want to say
There has got to be some words that will cover what you want to tell

But how will it be received and is it to soon to say
You know the feelings are there, and there’s got to be a way
To express how you feel and how it grows stronger and stronger each day
You think maybe IM dreaming do I deserve to feel this way

The words are coming to me I think I know what to say
But what if their not received and she doesn’t feel the same way
But you’ve got to take a chance for the happiness you deserve to feel
Because you know these feelings are all very real

But those words are so hard to say
And if I say them and they are received it would make my day
They don’t come out lightly and have a lasting impact
Because when I say them I mean them and that’s a fact

So I guess its time to say what has been on my mind and in my heart
And take that chance that will help to decide if we are to be together or apart
For now these words come to my lips so easy
And I mean each word from the bottom of my soul and my heart

I Love You

There I’ve said it the die is cast
These feelings are too strong for it not to last
So I say them once again

I Love You

© Copyright 2001 B Thomas Daniels - All Rights Reserved
athena4
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1 posted 2001-06-24 08:47 PM


Beautiful! I hope you have a lucky lady to send this to. The words will dance into her heart, and the depth of love will leave her awestruck...
              Elise

wayoutwalt
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2 posted 2001-06-24 08:52 PM


I know that LeAnne loved this to death when you showed it to her o yuh!! Nive honesty and very moving o yuh!
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3 posted 2001-06-24 09:22 PM


Fandaen~
Welcome to the greatest circle of poets and friends on the Internet.

Very nicely expressed sentiments !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Lone Wolf
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4 posted 2001-06-24 09:30 PM


She is one lucky lady, I must say.  This was beautiful, Fandaen.  

Welcome to Passions!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Fandaen
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5 posted 2001-06-25 09:07 PM


Thank you all for the warm welcome.
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