Satiated....................

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Open Poetry #14

Satiated....................

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

0 posted 2001-06-24 10:30 AM

Collapsed suggests a failure
at the end of what we do,
Expire sounds so dire yer
bound to find it final in review,
Relief would have one think
that we are glad when we are through,
and Spent I hear coins clink
after a deposit, how about you?

Gratified comes close yet seen
as a one way transaction,
Fulfilled probably means
we'll n'er again enjoy the action,
Refreshed I tend to glean
too cool in aftermath's hot passion,
Content portrays a scene
too pastoral post heavy breathin' thrashin'.

What word would you then feel
describes the pleasure of just Loved?
For soon you know you'll hunger for the meal
we're speaking of,
it's just a suggestion we'll
offer with kid gloves,
but for me there's great appeal
in the title word above.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2001-06-24 12:39 PM

Well...nicely done, and from a man's point of view, does that really ever happen? Just kidding. Nice rhyming there Richard.

~*~ Tell someone you love them today, as tomorrow may never come ~*~

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2001-06-24 12:51 PM

Yes, it does have great appeal for it, of course, can mean satisfied in so many different ways. This one would work for a spiritual journey, as well, don't you agree.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2001-06-24 08:02 PM

I think that word fits fine.......

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