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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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~*~ Cottonwood's shimmy brings sounds of seafoam to hear only in my mind ~*~ landlocked, but the gulls followed gulf breezes to feed on our earthy treats ~*~ morn air holds salty breezes come to fill my lungs salt is tang on tongue ~*~ wind, move cotton's leaves I close my eyes and believe foam touches my feet ~*~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari dearest heart, this is lovely and soft, you've not lost your touch with these at all. Wonderful writing my sister, absolutely wonderful love as always Puck    Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mushy, the day I lose my touch, I shall expect your foot to be firmly planted in my backside! Good morning hugs right back at ya! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Me wuv it all ... but this me favowite~ 'morn air holds salty breezes come to fill my lungs salt is tang on tongue' *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Marge...me wuv you too! LOL.... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Oooh, I like this! I think I should print it out and frame it for those days when I so strongly want the coastal waters, breezes, mist. Lovely, Sunshine!!! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful images you haev invoked, Sunshine.  All writing comes |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I have all this and more, so you put to pen the love of my life so well, for this is but 5 minutes away, now how lucky am I? This was beautiful Sunny girl. ~*~ Tell someone you love them today, as tomorrow may never come ~*~ |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I need a ticket to Transporation,please. It makes me want to be there! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Karilea- these are wonderful! i love them all, but i must echo Marge... "morn air holds salty breezes come to fill my lungs salt is tang on tongue" this is my favorite too... hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 06-24-2001).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
imagination is the best transportation reality slows |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
-wind, move cotton's leaves I close my eyes and believe foam touches my feet- To close the eyes, and smile gently, is to take us to all the realms of all the universes..Thank you for the ticket, Sis...gentle smile |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Sunshine...this is a keeper. Well done. Bob |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
What a visual feast for the senses, thank you for posting this! "This rose has seen red, I have been blue |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you ALL so very much! |
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