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Sunshine
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0 posted 2001-06-24 08:48 AM



~*~

Cottonwood's shimmy
brings sounds of seafoam to hear
only in my mind

~*~

landlocked, but the gulls
followed gulf breezes to feed
on our earthy treats

~*~

morn air holds salty
breezes come to fill my lungs
salt is tang on tongue

~*~

wind, move cotton's leaves
I close my eyes and believe
foam touches my feet

~*~

© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-24 08:58 AM


Kari dearest heart, this is lovely and soft, you've not lost your touch with these at all. Wonderful writing my sister, absolutely wonderful
take care
love as always
Puck
  

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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2 posted 2001-06-24 09:01 AM


Mushy, the day I lose my touch, I shall expect your foot to be firmly planted in my backside!

Good morning hugs right back at ya!

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3 posted 2001-06-24 12:13 PM


Karilea~
Me wuv it all ... but this me favowite~

'morn air holds salty
breezes come to fill my lungs
salt is tang on tongue'


*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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4 posted 2001-06-24 12:16 PM


Ah Marge...me wuv you too!  LOL....
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5 posted 2001-06-24 12:44 PM


Oooh, I like this!  I think I should print it out and frame it for those days when I so strongly want the coastal waters, breezes, mist.  Lovely, Sunshine!!!
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6 posted 2001-06-24 12:47 PM


Wonderful images you haev invoked, Sunshine.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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7 posted 2001-06-24 01:02 PM


I have all this and more, so you put to pen the love of my life so well, for this is but 5 minutes away, now how lucky am I?  This was beautiful Sunny girl.

~*~ Tell someone you love them today, as tomorrow may never come ~*~

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8 posted 2001-06-24 01:08 PM


I need a ticket to Transporation,please. It makes me want to be there!
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9 posted 2001-06-24 01:18 PM


Karilea-
   these are wonderful!  
   i love them all, but i
   must echo Marge...

            "morn air holds salty
        breezes come to fill my lungs
            salt is tang on tongue"


   this is my favorite too...  

   hugs,
   ~vicky
  


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes


[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 06-24-2001).]

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10 posted 2001-06-24 03:41 PM


imagination
is the best transportation
reality slows

Logan
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11 posted 2001-06-24 04:38 PM


-wind, move cotton's leaves
I close my eyes and believe
foam touches my feet-

To close the eyes, and smile gently, is to take us to all the realms of all the universes..Thank you for the ticket, Sis...gentle smile


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12 posted 2001-06-24 05:01 PM


Sunshine...this is a keeper. Well done. Bob
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13 posted 2001-06-24 07:30 PM


What a visual feast for the senses, thank you for posting this!

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I'm going to Ireland in 2002!" Kathleen.

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14 posted 2001-06-25 02:03 PM


Thank you ALL so very much!
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