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Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-06-23 06:07 PM

The whispers in the wind
Is you calling out for me
You are as permanent as the bark
That grows all around a tree

You are the words that come to life
As they flow freely from a poet's pen
You are the chorus of a love song
That seems to have no end

You are the music in my heart
That forever plays love's tune
You are the galaxy of stars
That surround the silvery moon

The first welcoming drops of rain
That come long after the drought
I'm so very sure they're you
In fact - I have no doubt!

Suetang

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-06-23 06:10 PM

I've seen drought
I've seen rain
and all is held
in your refrain!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2001-06-23 06:13 PM

Sue, this is adorable. I enjoyed it muchly!!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-06-23 09:27 PM

SueTang~
A wonderfully refreshing read.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2001-06-23 09:30 PM

Suetang-
very beautiful write...

i really enjoyed reading this..

~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

5 posted 2001-06-23 10:43 PM

Thanks for sharing this
it is wonderful

Connie

zzz
Member

since 2001-06-06

Posts 55

6 posted 2001-06-26 10:31 PM

ahh to love and loose is better than never knowig love as they say having these feelings is what makes life worth while
keep on lovin nice read

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

7 posted 2001-06-26 11:08 PM

Nicely done ST...enjoyed this.

jwesley

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

8 posted 2001-06-26 11:50 PM

Beautiful sentiments. Very nicely done.

PM

"..And deem each hour to musing given
a step upon the road to Heaven"
--Sir Walter Scott (from Marmion)

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

9 posted 2001-06-27 12:01 PM

I'm so glad that so many people enjoyed reading this one. Thank you all so much for your kindness. Take care......Sue

Suetang

Fancy
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 189
TN/USA

10 posted 2001-06-27 02:14 AM

...this reads with such great expression of feelings...

"...don't ever stop loving, don't ever stop believing, don't ever stop dreaming your dreams..."
Warmly...
Fancy

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