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Left Me Alone In A Memory
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Left Me Alone In A Memory |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Left alone, Left alone In a memory, With your sweet kisses, Left alone In the dark, Walking alone In the park, Night has filled the stars, Left alone In a memory, Left alone In a memory, Standing here alone It Is hard for me To realise What was right or wrong? never knew this would happened, Hard to believe, You are gone, And you left me alone In a memory A memory that we shared, left me alone In a dark, Walking alone In a park, At night, stars are so bright, Wished you were here, holding me tight, But you are gone, And left me alone, In a memory, The days are long, And nights are short, Days go by slowly, When you are alone, And when you had written a song , singing It alone, when you are gone, Left me In a memory, |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
And in time, the lonely memories are replaced by happier ones.....alone need not last forever.....loved this one, vandana...  The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Strong sentiments, V. Been there all too often. Inspires me to post an older poem, along the same lines, called "ALONE ONCE MORE"... check it out soon. -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
sad and soulful write, vandana, it could so easily be a song I'm hoping that for you it's a time of self-discovery to find how wonderful you are alone, so that you can bring the full you, the true you into a 'togetherness' |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
not a place to be left my friend. . . heartfelt. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
This was so hauntingly sad but so very beautiful. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetVanDana~ Sometimes you write as if your little heart is breaking. Sending *Hugs*, my friend. Love you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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