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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
When did the words Spilled like blood From my soul Lose interest For you? Eloquent? No…. But eloquence Is not all Offered in This exposure Of ideals, Emotions, And hopes. Perhaps… It is boredom…. That nothing new Or insightful To your daily Living is offered. Or perhaps it is Apathy… From self centered Preoccupation Then again… The words Are for me as Much as you… And I will devour Them…. And yours… And all… Such a feast!!! Such a menu…. Hey buddy…. Can you spare A rhyme… |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
The great poetry depression of 2001, eh? An intriguing work, Ron, and much appreciated here. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
no one hears my rhyme but me so I shall speak then, a soliloquy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cpat Hair, Butterflies are whys. Enjoyed |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
smile a rhyme just in time ....  well written poem, this! regards, sudhir "I was born intelligent - education ruined me" |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Yep, I like this one, lots!!! |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Thought-provoking (always a good thing!). I especially liked your last stanza -- ironic, clever, and a hint sarcastic. Well expressed. -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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