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A poetic thank you to passions
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A poetic thank you to passions |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Is this muse of mine returning? Perhaps a little at a time. I have just been so frustrated, no words have been here to rhyme. Each day I come here to this page to see the words of friends, and in amongst the beauty here I find the words don't end. As I read I hear the poets voice as it whispers on the wind and slowly in this heart of mine I feel as though my heart may mend. Slowly a smile spreads to my lips as my eyes dance across the page and I find a certain sort of wisdom here that releases me from my cage. And in these words I "see mem'ries brushed upon the canvas of life" and though twas "just a thought that passed" her wisdom brings an ending to my strife. Sometimes "I play this back over and over again" "in my moments of sweet recall," and I read the "traces she leaves behind" as they pick me up from my fall. All of these moments that I spend reading the words of those so dear although I am not present every day be assured that in my heart I am near. I find this place to be a comfort, providing serenity and peace I wish you all the very best and may your muses never cease. I feel a stirring deep in my soul as a light begins to burn and maybe through the friendship here my muse will somehow return. (and to all of you whose lines I have borrowed, I thank you all so much. I couldn't think of a better way than to thank you by including some of your words.) Love and Peace. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. ~Me~ [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 06-23-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Borrow away Donna....it is what makes Passions the place it is....we are all givers of life....in one form or another.... and your gift here, is drink for many.... well done little one... |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
I think this is a very sweet tribute to Passions. I'll second that (don't know if it's the right expression, but always wanted to say that line, you'll get the picture I think)  Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sunshine, the poets here are all givers of life, and I can not thank them enough. My cup is full from the friendship found here. I appreciate you so much. Hugs. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. ~Me~ [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 06-23-2001).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Titia, rest assured that I got the picture. Thank you for painting it. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
thank you Donna. . .  now, write on!!!! --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sven, from this cup so divine I cherish each friend that I find, and am honored to call you one of them who helps my words return again. THANK YOU, and peace. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Donna, Thank YOU! You and your wonderful words are part of what makes this place so special.  Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"I find this place to be a comfort, providing serenity and peace I wish you all the very best and may your muses never cease." Beautifully written Gentle Spirit ... this is indeed, such a wonderful place to take comfort ... you've captured this wonderfully! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Love's Addiction Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 57all around you |
my dear aunt , i dont think i coulda put it any better.........thanks for the awesome read... love ya much  I can't hold on.....how do u think i've lost so much?....i'm so afraid....-Linkin Park |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentleSpirit~ In gentle caress we hold your Spirit-on-the-mend Comforting thoughts we share from muses who gently send a phrase or two to enlighten we send so quillingly~ Thank you GentleSpirit ... for accepting them willingly~  *Hugs*~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
GentleSpirit, you have written a beautiful verse. Glad you are starting to mend and give of yourself once again. Lovely words, ME |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
your heart has a dream as beautiful as you think think nice thoughts and dream Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I want to thank you all. I have fond many treasures of memories here, and many friends to treasure. Hugs and peace to you all. ~Donna~ On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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