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Thanks Again or Missing You... |
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Ladycat 
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX 
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This is for the rebel that taugh me how to be the only person that I never wanted to be and the person that I always wanted to be at the same time. Thank you Jimmy... Locking eyes on a dark street corner We are sent into the zone of desulsionment Silly, you believed that we could exsist peacefully Our mistake Wrap me in your sorrow and shame Suddenly your pain will become my pleasure As we sail off together on our flaming boat of passion I let loose my hatred on you You tell me of my dreaded death, yet we find other rather appealing in a round about kind of way There you left me begging for everlasting life Maybe that was too much to ask for though I spit in your face of rebellion You wiped yourself clean and walked away The dust from your boots hitting the road slapped me in he face Road rough and cold The realization that bliss will never be the same without you finally flitered in my life For the first time ever, I truely felt alone Love, Ladycat Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. [This message has been edited by Ladycat (edited 06-23-2001).] |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
It certainly is a treat when I get to read your stuff. The lead up to the realization here was great. I love this. |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Full of emotion!Loved it! |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Love and Hate.... Good Write Thanks Connie |
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