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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2001-06-22 05:50 PM





Air filled with thunder
Dark clouds at the horizon
Storm is being born




Endless rows of green
Awating the needed rain
Food for you and me



A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 06-22-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-06-22 06:44 PM


these are wonderful...I love the rain  
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2 posted 2001-06-22 06:48 PM


Titia-
   i want it to rain here!!! lol
   these are great!
   i like them alot!  

   ~vicky

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heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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3 posted 2001-06-22 09:03 PM


Outstanding images here!

"This rose has seen red, I have been blue
I'm going to Ireland in 2002!" Kathleen.

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4 posted 2001-06-22 09:05 PM


You make the rain beautiful, Titia.  Great haiku!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Sunshine
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5 posted 2001-06-22 10:10 PM


A double Brava, then, for you!
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6 posted 2001-06-22 10:11 PM



Perfectly expressed!  

Take care,
Melissa~

Titia Geertman
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7 posted 2001-06-23 12:41 PM


Thanks for all your kind words.
This is what I see when I look out of my rear (and also front)window.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

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Deep in the heart
8 posted 2001-06-23 01:09 PM


You are getting so good at this.  A double Haiku doubles my pleasure
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9 posted 2001-06-23 03:17 PM


Titia~
Beautiful !  Beautiful !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

Titia Geertman
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10 posted 2001-06-23 06:15 PM


Thanks to you friends.
And Interloper: I hope so, because it's an easy form of writing poetry for me, I don't have to rhyme, only three lines, saving me for endless thinking of rhyming words in English. (LOL)

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

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