Open Poetry #14 |
Dark clouds at the horizon - double haiku |
Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Air filled with thunder Dark clouds at the horizon Storm is being born Endless rows of green Awating the needed rain Food for you and me A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100 [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 06-22-2001).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
these are wonderful...I love the rain |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Titia- i want it to rain here!!! lol these are great! i like them alot! ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Outstanding images here! "This rose has seen red, I have been blue |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
You make the rain beautiful, Titia. Great haiku! All writing comes |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A double Brava, then, for you! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Perfectly expressed! Take care, Melissa~ |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Thanks for all your kind words. This is what I see when I look out of my rear (and also front)window. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You are getting so good at this. A double Haiku doubles my pleasure |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Titia~ Beautiful ! Beautiful ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Thanks to you friends. And Interloper: I hope so, because it's an easy form of writing poetry for me, I don't have to rhyme, only three lines, saving me for endless thinking of rhyming words in English. (LOL) Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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