Dark clouds at the horizon - double haiku

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Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

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Netherlands

0 posted 2001-06-22 05:50 PM

Air filled with thunder
Dark clouds at the horizon
Storm is being born

Endless rows of green
Awating the needed rain
Food for you and me

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 06-22-2001).]

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

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with you

1 posted 2001-06-22 06:44 PM

these are wonderful...I love the rain

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

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Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2001-06-22 06:48 PM

Titia-
   i want it to rain here!!! lol
   these are great!
   i like them alot!

~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

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3 posted 2001-06-22 09:03 PM

Outstanding images here!

"This rose has seen red, I have been blue
I'm going to Ireland in 2002!" Kathleen.

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

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Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-06-22 09:05 PM

You make the rain beautiful, Titia. Great haiku!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

5 posted 2001-06-22 10:10 PM

A double Brava, then, for you!

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

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Ontario, CANADA

6 posted 2001-06-22 10:11 PM

Perfectly expressed!

Take care,
Melissa~

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

7 posted 2001-06-23 12:41 PM

Thanks for all your kind words.
This is what I see when I look out of my rear (and also front)window.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

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Deep in the heart

8 posted 2001-06-23 01:09 PM

You are getting so good at this. A double Haiku doubles my pleasure

Marge Tindal

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9 posted 2001-06-23 03:17 PM

Titia~
Beautiful ! Beautiful !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

10 posted 2001-06-23 06:15 PM

Thanks to you friends.
And Interloper: I hope so, because it's an easy form of writing poetry for me, I don't have to rhyme, only three lines, saving me for endless thinking of rhyming words in English. (LOL)

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

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