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When you are lost
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When you are lost |
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JamesBowie Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 252big old Bangor Maine up by the shack |
When you are lost there is no one who can help find you no one that can help with words feelings fall flat as black slate If someone tries to talk You shut out what they are saying Closing out the " I love you" lines caring only about "leave me alone" So you just have to wait until a flower catches your eye and you realize that you don't care and your neglect has caused it to wither This is the definition of selfish This is all that bitterness cultivates No creation left in that sad soul Nothing but waste in your empty hole |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you expressed this perfectly......  |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
So true my friend, so true. Hit close with this one. Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Fancy Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 189TN/USA |
...aptly you described loss...I like it very much... "...don't ever stop loving, don't ever stop believing, don't ever stop dreaming your dreams..." |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Wakes me up, this does. here I have been feeling a little selfish lately..wanting to be alone and keep my attitude and such. I love the way you write. I believe that I have told ya that before, right?  |
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