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Open Poetry #14

Windy Candle

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2001-05-23 02:10 PM

Candle flame flickers,
Wind slips under the window,
Then smoke and darkness.

Cold fingers searches,
Placing flame back to the wick,
Returns the flicker.

Gloom

angelbear
Member

since 2001-05-22

Posts 139
North East, USA

1 posted 2001-05-23 03:11 PM

So little can say so much. Again, this is what I find most creative and meaningful. Wonderful work.

Until you are are near it, you will never see it, until you live it you will never know it...this is why we must not judge it.

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

2 posted 2001-05-23 03:13 PM

yes professor...let your light shine...helen

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

3 posted 2001-05-23 03:18 PM

gloom, thy night is gone
return to thy candle's light
escape burning bright

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

4 posted 2001-05-23 04:44 PM

Thank you, angelbear,
Your words are kind,
And I do prefer the shorter forms.

Thank you, Helen,
I am pleased you liked it.

Thank you, Decaflame
Decaflame response,
builds pleasure from revealing,
the inner shining.

Gloom

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

5 posted 2001-05-23 05:41 PM

When candles flicker and die,
May the flame always be near.

Beautiful work..

corey14
Member

since 2001-05-23

Posts 89
Boston, Mass, U.S.A.

6 posted 2001-05-23 06:09 PM

it is a good pome

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-05-21 01:46 PM

good write Gloom

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