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LADY LYON
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since 2001-06-22
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0 posted 2001-06-22 11:58 PM


Back in your hand
          my hand goes
Back in your heart
          my heart grows
Back in your life
          my life soars

Together and apart
We will never be without

          One another
(copyright 2/14/2000 by: Yael Lyon Erickson)

"Don't take the blue pill..."

© Copyright 2001 YAEL LYON ERICKSON - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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with you
1 posted 2001-06-23 12:00 PM


Welcome!   I liked this.....very sweet  
rosepetals25
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2 posted 2001-06-23 12:05 PM


LADY LYON,


  Welcome to Passions

  I have to agree with SEA.. very sweet I liked it

TaraB

LADY LYON
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3 posted 2001-06-23 12:05 PM


Thanks very much for the compliment, SEA.  This is my first time sending a poem anywhere and was the first poem I ever wrote, and had it not been for the encouragement of my boyfriend, I probably would never have thought of doing it -- I didn't know things like this existed.

Yael

"Don't take the blue pill..."

Severn
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4 posted 2001-06-23 12:08 PM


Welcome Lady Lyon...good to have you here...

nice poem and hugs for being brave!

K

LADY LYON
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5 posted 2001-06-23 12:10 PM


Thank you Tara.  The inspiration for this poem was my long-term relationship with my best-friend who is now my boyfriend.

Yael

"Don't take the blue pill..."

Balladeer
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6 posted 2001-06-23 12:11 PM


simple, sweet and touching...I welcome you and am happy you will share your poetry with us  
LADY LYON
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7 posted 2001-06-23 12:13 PM


Thank you Severn.  I am very touched by your use of the word "brave" -- it choked me up, in a good way.

Yael

"Don't take the blue pill..."

LADY LYON
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since 2001-06-22
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8 posted 2001-06-23 12:17 PM


Thank you Balladeer.  Your words are just as touching.

Yael

"Don't take the blue pill..."

Poet deVine
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9 posted 2001-06-23 12:55 PM


Welcome to our family! This is a wonderful poem - I look forward to reading more from you! Please check your email!  
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
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10 posted 2001-06-23 02:23 AM


Please add my welcome to the list...
so nice to have you here in poetry land.
this is sweet and sincere write.
take care
jm

I'm going crazy, I'm losing sleep.
I'm in too far, I'm in way too deep over you.
You'll always be the one.
You were the first, you'll be the last.

Waseem Cheema
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since 2001-03-16
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11 posted 2001-06-23 02:24 AM


LADY LYON,
Very nice.....Welcome tp passion..
Hope to see more and much beautiful poems from you soon          

ThUnDeRkYsS
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12 posted 2001-06-23 03:40 AM


Welcome, beautiful job... hope you enjoy your stay here with all your new friends  

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.



vlraynes
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13 posted 2001-06-23 05:46 AM


LADY LYON-
   beautiful thoughts so nicely penned..
   welcome to passions.
   i know you'll love our 'family of friends'  

   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Sunshine
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14 posted 2001-06-23 07:04 AM


The length of poem never matters, as long as it comes from your heart.  Welcome to Passions!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
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Pennsylvania
15 posted 2001-06-23 07:36 AM


Thank you for this lovely touch of warmth
Very sweet
Liz

Zinsser
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16 posted 2001-06-23 11:36 AM


Welcome!!!!
Have Fun

Connie

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