Open Poetry #14 |
Just Now.................. |
RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
My Love doth glide, The air it rides This Sunday afternoon. The gentle rain On window pane, This day in our Love's June. It's whispered tap, Lured me to nap, Mid reclining poem read. So through dreamed air, It traveled there, To you, it felt your need. Though message hushed, Did thou feel my brush Just a moment ago? Dream't gentle hand, The stance spanned, Just wanted you to know. That was I, My Love doth fly To touch upon your hair. Tht lightness felt, From Loves wish dealt, Reminding you I care. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
A nice reminder indeed |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful!! You have a very romantic style of writing. I love it. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is so soft and sweet |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I loved this one, so gentle and the last stanza was so romantic you old softie you! ~*~ Tell someone you love them today, as tomorrow may never come ~*~ |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
A lazy rainy day Sunday afternoon for me to think about as the weekend fast approaches I treasure those tranquil moments of soft reflection...you've captured the mood perfectly. "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
you do have a soft, sweet heart |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Geez thank you all! This is a grand departure from how I'm accustomed to being treated. I just received an e-mail from someone at the site I just abandon telling me how untalented and mean I am. Maybe I'm home here. |
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