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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2001-06-22 03:25 PM


I see images of yesterday
still playing through my mind,
I recall the day you went away
to go searching, a destiny to find.

Like a tape, I keep rewinding
hoping somehow to find a clue,
to help you find your answers
and understand the things you do.

In amongst these vivid images
I see moments that have went by,
and days filled with so much love
when our spirits flew on high.

These images are embedded
in my heart so very deep,
each one is such a treasure
a jewel that I must keep.

And just this very morning
I found a treasure, just a smile,
such warmth it brought into my soul
another image to be kept on file.

I sit spellbound by these jewels
as I linger here, a moment to play
I hit play back one more time...
I see images of yesterday.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

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SEA
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with you
1 posted 2001-06-22 03:28 PM


I know just how this feels......treasures indeed  
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2 posted 2001-06-22 03:35 PM


I have some images that I play back over and over too.    Loved it!

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the human mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

Watersign6
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3 posted 2001-06-22 03:39 PM


great poem i enjoyed  
Love's Addiction
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all around you
4 posted 2001-06-22 06:32 PM


Simply lovely...that's all i can say

if love wants me, then it can come find me
if music was a weapon, many ppl would be dead

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2001-06-22 06:57 PM


Very nice...James
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Deep in the heart
6 posted 2001-06-23 01:54 PM


mem'ries
vivid palette colors
brushed upon the canvas of life
hung, framed, in time
mem'ries

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2001-06-23 01:58 PM


Gentle,
Very nice enjoyed the read.

Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2001-06-23 04:19 PM


GentleSpirit~

When spirits wander
as they will
Out among the daffodil
Evening curtains rise in light
at finding even one delight
Of posey left in sweetest bloom
to light the heart
of one in gloom
A smile is sent
and finds it's way
upon the lips
of one to stay
In moments of the sweet recall
of wandering spirit in us all~

Thanks for the *gentle* inspiration.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
9 posted 2001-06-23 04:22 PM


Some tapes are vintage, my dear....

some tapes....need to be erased.  Not a comment to your poem...it is lovely....

just a thought that passed my pan.

sodpossom
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10 posted 2001-06-23 04:52 PM


Very well done!I loved it!
Janet Marie
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11 posted 2001-06-23 05:03 PM


These images are embedded
in my heart so very deep,
each one is such a treasure
a jewel that I must keep.

And just this very morning
I found a treasure, just a smile,
such warmth it brought into my soul
another image to be kept on file.

I sit spellbound by these jewels
as I linger here, a moment to play
I hit play back one more time...
I see images of yesterday.
========================

Donna this is lovely...
the traces left behind ... imprints on our hearts..
sincere sweet write.
well done poetess gentle  

I'm going crazy, I'm losing sleep.
I'm in too far, I'm in way too deep over you.
You'll always be the one.
You were the first, you'll be the last.

Gentle Spirit
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12 posted 2001-06-23 05:25 PM


Sea, indeed they are treasures, and I treasure your replies.  Thank You.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Gentle Spirit
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13 posted 2001-06-23 05:26 PM


Michael, it is nice to be able to play them back over and over sometimes.  Thanks.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Gentle Spirit
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14 posted 2001-06-23 05:26 PM


Watersign, I am glad that you enjoyed.  

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Gentle Spirit
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15 posted 2001-06-23 05:28 PM


Thanks hon (loves addiction).  You know I appreciate it.  

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Gentle Spirit
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16 posted 2001-06-23 05:29 PM


James, Thank you for the kind words.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Gentle Spirit
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17 posted 2001-06-23 05:30 PM


Interloper, that is such a lovely verse.  Thank you for another treasure.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Gentle Spirit
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18 posted 2001-06-23 05:30 PM


Seymour, thank you very much.  I do so appreciate it.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Gentle Spirit
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19 posted 2001-06-23 05:33 PM


Marge, this is a gem to add into my treasures.  Most definatley it
should be posted separately for everyone to enjoy!!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Gentle Spirit
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20 posted 2001-06-23 05:34 PM


Sunshine, I enjoy the wisdom of your words,
they are like a warm sunny day.....
warming the soul.  Thank you.  

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Gentle Spirit
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21 posted 2001-06-23 05:35 PM


sodpossom, I thank you.    

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Gentle Spirit
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22 posted 2001-06-23 05:38 PM


Janet, I don't know if I can ever
begin to express how much the
lovely sentiments you leave
here for me to read mean to me.
You are a dear treasure also.
Thank you.  gentle hugs.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Suetang
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23 posted 2001-06-23 06:02 PM


What a beautifully written poem, I enjoyed it immensely.  Take care......Sue

Suetang

Gentle Spirit
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24 posted 2001-06-23 06:05 PM


Sue, thank you, I am glad that you enjoyed. *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

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