Open Poetry #14 |
Images of Yesterday |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I see images of yesterday still playing through my mind, I recall the day you went away to go searching, a destiny to find. Like a tape, I keep rewinding hoping somehow to find a clue, to help you find your answers and understand the things you do. In amongst these vivid images I see moments that have went by, and days filled with so much love when our spirits flew on high. These images are embedded in my heart so very deep, each one is such a treasure a jewel that I must keep. And just this very morning I found a treasure, just a smile, such warmth it brought into my soul another image to be kept on file. I sit spellbound by these jewels as I linger here, a moment to play I hit play back one more time... I see images of yesterday. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I know just how this feels......treasures indeed |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I have some images that I play back over and over too. Loved it! Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
great poem i enjoyed |
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Love's Addiction Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 57all around you |
Simply lovely...that's all i can say if love wants me, then it can come find me |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
mem'ries vivid palette colors brushed upon the canvas of life hung, framed, in time mem'ries |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle, Very nice enjoyed the read. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentleSpirit~ When spirits wander as they will Out among the daffodil Evening curtains rise in light at finding even one delight Of posey left in sweetest bloom to light the heart of one in gloom A smile is sent and finds it's way upon the lips of one to stay In moments of the sweet recall of wandering spirit in us all~ Thanks for the *gentle* inspiration. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Some tapes are vintage, my dear.... some tapes....need to be erased. Not a comment to your poem...it is lovely.... just a thought that passed my pan. |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Very well done!I loved it! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
These images are embedded in my heart so very deep, each one is such a treasure a jewel that I must keep. And just this very morning I found a treasure, just a smile, such warmth it brought into my soul another image to be kept on file. I sit spellbound by these jewels as I linger here, a moment to play I hit play back one more time... I see images of yesterday. ======================== Donna this is lovely... the traces left behind ... imprints on our hearts.. sincere sweet write. well done poetess gentle I'm going crazy, I'm losing sleep. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sea, indeed they are treasures, and I treasure your replies. Thank You. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Michael, it is nice to be able to play them back over and over sometimes. Thanks. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Watersign, I am glad that you enjoyed. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanks hon (loves addiction). You know I appreciate it. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
James, Thank you for the kind words. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Interloper, that is such a lovely verse. Thank you for another treasure. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Seymour, thank you very much. I do so appreciate it. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Marge, this is a gem to add into my treasures. Most definatley it should be posted separately for everyone to enjoy!! On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sunshine, I enjoy the wisdom of your words, they are like a warm sunny day..... warming the soul. Thank you. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
sodpossom, I thank you. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Janet, I don't know if I can ever begin to express how much the lovely sentiments you leave here for me to read mean to me. You are a dear treasure also. Thank you. gentle hugs. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
What a beautifully written poem, I enjoyed it immensely. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sue, thank you, I am glad that you enjoyed. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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