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Open Poetry #14

The Screen Porch

RMW
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since 2001-03-21

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0 posted 2001-06-22 09:52 PM

The Screen Porch

If I could open like a book
Would I induce a northern warmth
As when a woman lies in bed
Staring at a winter hearth.

Or would a southern porch instead
Reveal an empty room where page
On page enjoys a breeze,
Myself alone content to please.

RMW

Sunshine

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1 posted 2001-06-22 09:55 PM

where page on pages enjoys a breeze...

I wondered who had moved them when I wasn't looking...

RMW
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since 2001-03-21

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2 posted 2001-06-22 10:03 PM

Sunshine..... laughing. Thanks for stopping by. Bob

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

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Deep in the heart

3 posted 2001-06-23 01:11 PM

I think you should have a porch completely surrounding your home, as we do here in the south, so you can catch all the breezes. The better to turn your pages

Martie

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4 posted 2001-06-26 01:18 PM

Bob--Your book has many pages...each so interesting, as is this one.

JLR
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since 2001-02-04

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5 posted 2001-06-26 01:25 PM

Either way---enjoyed!

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

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6 posted 2001-06-26 02:48 PM

and the difference would be??? It is the warmth and comfort..

enjoyable indeed...

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

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7 posted 2001-06-26 02:55 PM

Well done my poet friend!

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