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Mysteria
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0 posted 2001-06-22 04:36 AM


All You Need Is Trust



And A Little Bit Of Pixie Dust


Now I can't rhyme worth a bean,
And we both know that's true,
But I'm gonna make you believe in Neverland,
If it's the last thing I ever do!

So take my hand and hold on tight,
Let's cover your bootie with pixie dust.
Make sure it's all swished around,
Flying with me, that dust's a must!

First stop, along the way are the archives,
We will sit awhile and read a poem,
Here we are, it says, "Balladeer",
I knocked but no one's home.

Let's sit a spell and read a few.
This one looks good, "The Efficient Waiter".
Oh wait a second, I think I found one better...
This one's called, "The Gator Hater".

Here is one about a country doctor,
by the name of "Ben McGee".
And before I tuck you in tonight,
I could read, "Say Hello To God For Me".

Aren't you glad I brought you here,
To read some stories of Neverland?
He's the best story teller there ever was,
And boy, he rhymes too beat the band!

This little journey to Neverland,
Was meant to rekindle the kid in you.
Keep smiling and writing those poems,
Here's a hug 'cause we care about you too!


Just a little thank you to Balladeer for all his trips to Neverland!  Without fantasy this world would only be stark reality, and what an awful world it would be!



"Unless you become as little Children,
you can't see the Kingdom of God"
~ Jesus



~*~ Tell someone you love them today, as tomorrow may never come ~*~

[This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 06-22-2001).]

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Waseem Cheema
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1 posted 2001-06-22 07:01 AM


Very intersting
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2 posted 2001-06-22 07:09 AM


Wonderful!!! And he has graced us with many a good poem these past few years. (I like the bootie covered in pixie dust line!! LOL)
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3 posted 2001-06-22 07:09 AM


Mysteria,this is cute as a button and i enjoyed reading it very much and now that I am able to get here again,long story but I had some problems with my laptop thats why you havent seen me around but now I am back and have tons of reading to do  
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4 posted 2001-06-22 01:12 PM


Sharon: There is nothing quite like a pixie covered bootie!  Thanks and big smiles.

Watersign6: Glad to see you are back and thank you.

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5 posted 2001-06-22 09:05 PM


bravo!!!

"This rose has seen red, I have been blue
I'm going to Ireland in 2002!" Kathleen.

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6 posted 2001-06-22 10:07 PM


I thought I heard bells...then I saw something sparkling over in the corner, and there you sat, being quietly clever!

Aren't the archives glorious?

And, ahem...GOOD JOB on the poem!  You picked a character who has left us many memorable moments!

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7 posted 2001-06-22 10:09 PM



What a precious write for our dear Balladeer, he will love this, as I do!  

Take care,
Melissa~

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8 posted 2001-06-22 11:25 PM



I BELIEVE! I BELIEVE!!!



Mysteria lady, this is such a wonderful thing for you to do!   If my little trips through fantasy land by my poetry has brought a smile to your face, I am the proud one! Thank you, my friend, for this poem and, most of all, for your friendship  

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9 posted 2001-06-23 01:29 AM


Irish Rose: Ahhh - thank you!

Sunshine: You bet, and I spent some time in the vault of our own "Peter Pan".  I loved Dr. McGee, but then I was spoiled I got a voice email from the master doing it in "poisson"!  Thanks for reading this one Karilea.

Melissa: He is pretty special, thought he could use a hug or two! Thank you for dropping in!

Balladeer: Good!  All I wanted to do was paint a little smile on your face...consider yourself hugged big guy!  maaauuuhhhh

~*~ Tell someone you love them today, as tomorrow may never come ~*~

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10 posted 2001-06-23 10:57 AM


this is adorable and a perfect poetic reply to Deers Peter Pan poem...
having been inspired by a fellow poet makes it even more special...
and you rhyme FINE!!!  
well done poetess Mysteria

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11 posted 2001-06-23 11:07 AM


Mysteria~
Well, I like 'Balladeer Bootie' even without pixie dust ...
But, shucks ..... I'm game for new pleasures !
Come on Balladeer ... show me your sprinkles !

Shake ya' Bootie ... cutie !

You KNOW I like this one you little pixie-dust spreader ! ! !
We can fly.  We can fly.  We can fly.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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12 posted 2001-06-23 02:07 PM


Janet Marie: Thank you for your nice comment, and the rhyming worked?  Good!  That was literally like giving "birth" he he

Marge: Think of it! Bottled, Balladeer Bootie, guaranteed to make you rhyme in time, now that would be a product I might just buy.  Come on girl, grab my hand, let' go off to Neverland, and see what trouble we can get into there...you game?

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13 posted 2001-06-26 01:35 PM


Hmmmm.... just what have I wandered into here? *G* I don't know whether to mug Mysteria for some of her rhyming beans... or just sit back and enjoy the show of Balladeer swishing around with his bootie covered in pixie dust (a sight Toe and LJA would PAY to see! LOL)

This is delightful, Mysteria. *S*

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14 posted 2001-06-26 01:39 PM


This was so cute, made me smile.
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15 posted 2001-06-26 03:24 PM


Suthern: I can not rhyme with beans, so that makes this even more fun to do for him!  He is my link to fantasy and was just sprinkling him with more pixie dust (that would be a site, he he)!  Thanks so much for stopping in.

Gemini: I too am a Gemini!  Glad you enjoyed it!

"Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself."
~ Hopi ~

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