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wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2001-06-22 08:25 PM

I don’t say this here to hurt you
But love will soon desert you
The play of love is tragic
It dies from loss of magic
The twinkle in the eye of one in love

My star that shines forever
I hang when we’re together
But who will hold
This fire inside my heart

You are never with me
When I’m feeling e’er so gray
Your star is shining somewhere
But what good is yesterday

My heart is in its sections
Stage left and then be fast
Each one you hold directions
Why love will never last

I pump you like my blood
In-and-out and it’s good
And then I know you,
As the fire inside my heart

Sometimes it pumps in passion
Sometimes it pumps in ire
But every time it weakens
The chance it’s love’s desire

I don’t say this here to grieve you
One day I know I’ll leave you
The play of love is tragic
It dies from loss of magic
And my heart is weakened
Like it’s ne’er before

Say this and nothing more

…that this will never happen
my love for you is strong
and I shall never leave you
for would prove that I was wrong

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 06-22-2001).]

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-06-22 08:36 PM

awesome writing Walt

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-06-22 09:18 PM

Great work, Walt. You have said this so eloquently. I admire that.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-06-22 10:12 PM

Poet: Way Out Walt
Poem: Please Believe Me

What's wrong with this picture?

LOL

Good writing, you!

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

4 posted 2001-06-22 10:15 PM

Walt, this is now one of my favourites of your poems, this was so well expressed with graceful flair, well done

Take care,
Melissa~

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

5 posted 2001-06-22 11:49 PM

Walt, you smacked the proverbial nail right on the noggin...love does die from loss of magic...may it never happen to you and yours.

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

6 posted 2001-06-22 11:54 PM

Hi praise from all!!

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

7 posted 2001-06-23 05:54 AM

Walt, Walt, Walt-
WOW!! I am loving this!!

wonderful write...and full of truth.
i DO believe you...

hugs,
~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 06-23-2001).]

elisaseyes
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since 1999-07-15

Posts 196
fort worth texas

8 posted 2001-06-23 11:20 AM

A beautiful picture of the cycle of love that all couples experience.

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

9 posted 2001-06-23 11:44 AM

Just as long as your heart pumps and you stick around to write more verse for us, I'll be happy.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2001-06-23 12:20 PM

WayOutWaltWaltzingWinsomelyWOW~

I love your heart in waltz of love ! !

'Say this and nothing more

…that this will never happen
my love for you is strong
and I shall never leave you
for would prove that I was wrong'

You rock, poet !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

11 posted 2001-06-23 06:00 PM

enjoy

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

12 posted 2001-06-23 06:48 PM

I really appreciate all the kindness when I am in a funk o yuh

Temptress

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since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

13 posted 2001-06-23 07:26 PM

Walt
I love it when you write this way.
Your message is clear, and the hope at the end is wonderful.

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