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Rain Dreams - In Senryu
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Rain Dreams - In Senryu |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Rain Dreams Thundrous nights of rain Red Pines shadow forest eyes Safe is camp fire light Splash of dark waters Laughter in the smiling leers Prancing in the night Northern woods do charm At home the rain takes my heart Back to, Whetung Bay James Parker Haley June 20, 2001 |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Thundrous nights of rain Red Pines shadow forest eyes Safe is camp fire light ============================= now ya know a moth cant resist a camp fire  way cool imagery here P-man...and title "Red Pines shadow forest eyes" well done senryu sir  |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
gentle rain falling soft upon this heart of mine remembering you hey handsome... these are wonderfully inspiring.... (((hugs))) |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Nicely done..:-) -------------- |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Janet, SEA, KitKat, thank you very much. I'm trying to put together some thoughts of my visit to this place, into a normal piece. So you havent heard the last of Whetung Bay... Parker |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I'll be on the look out for it then |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
you snuck this one in here on me... very cool senyru.. like to visit a place like this....sounds pretty awesome..cant wait to read your "normal piece"...! hugs, g no i wont be afraid. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
This is lovely and sweet, poet. Cor |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Thunderous splash....feels good! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I truly enjoyed this, I felt the rain! "This rose has seen red, I have been blue |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
parker- hey there stranger! these are great! makes me want rain here in phoenix!! lol could you send a little this way? hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
SEA..... dg, just a hidden little bay in the North.. tall Pines, Canadian Shield Region.... Ontario is the land of lakes. Care to go skinny dipping... Corinne, thank you sweet poet. Lady In White, thank you. Kathleen, thank you. Vicky, long time... nice to see your name.. Parker |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
You have some superb imagery in these senryus, awesome work! Take care, Melissa~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wonderful presentation in my favorite format. I look forward to more. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
skinny dippin?? how cold is it..teeheehee!   , g |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Parker~ I really enjoyed the way you share a memory sounds like a very serene place to be...well until you and dg got there and went skinny dippin...lol Great write~ |
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