Open Poetry #14 |
Today is My Birthday... |
AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
today is my birthday and you said a few words really just blew it off while everyone else sang songs gave gifts, hugs, and kisses i went home and looked at the present i had bought for your birthday eight months in advance because it was perfect for a perfect person like you i thought how every day i struggled not to give it to you almost unable to contain my excitement just as i hadn't been able to before which is why i bought it in the first place tomorrow your birthday will come and i will say a few words really just blow it off while everyone else celebrates your day and i'll think of the present i had bought for your birthday eight months in advance collecting dust and waiting for the year an imperfect person like you deserves perfect love ~*Today is my 18th birthday!!! Yeah me!!!(Actually I had a pretty good one!)*~ I'm the answer to a question no one asked a sleepless dreamer, destroyed by passion |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Ani Happy B Day. You can do lotta things at 18 yuh more freedom less responsibility. Great way to get it started with a poem! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well Happy Birthday! And if someone "blew off your birthday", that really hurts, so I think you have to tell them how it made you feel so you loose any toxic feelings, and are able to enjoy a wonderful birthday memory. I enjoyed your poem. ~*~ Tell someone you love them today, as tomorrow may never come ~*~ |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
HAPPY BIRTHDAY ANI |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
Happy Birthday to you and that poem was good although I am sorry that someone blew it off I agree with Mysteria you should tell the person how it made you feel. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Happy Birthday, and you might as well start now, letting go of people that don't appreciate you. Or you will still be trying when you have my birthday, which is so many more years. Have fun all year at least. This is a big b-day. Sandra |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Happy Birthday!!! |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Yes happy birthday!!! (The 21st or the 22nd? Let me know so I can add you to the list!) |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Happy Birthday! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Where are the goodies???? Watch out, here we come.... Happy birthday to you Anikay Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
Thanks everyone for all the Happy Birthday wishes and great pics and smilies!!!! (It was the 21st) Thanks for reading! Much love all, Krissie I'm the answer to a question no one asked a sleepless dreamer, destroyed by passion |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Ani, Happy Birthday! And I can relate to how deeply it stings when you take the care and time for that special "one", and the special "one" does not return the same loving gesture. You have so many journeys ahead of you, follow new roads and enjoy being 21. Ah, if only I could go back... Elise |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wow, this was a very good piece with a powerful message inside. Wonderful write! I hope you had a very Happy Birthday!! All writing comes |
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FoxXena Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 141where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted |
Its my birthday as well. (well, in a few days actually). Happy B-Day though. *+*Would you be known by everybody? Then you know nobody.~ |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Happy 18th birthday to you!! I know how it hurts for someone you really like to not remember your special day. When you get as old as me you get alot of surprise parties because no one knows if you will still be here on your birthday! Like your poem and hope you like it here with us at PIP. ME |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Hey Krissie, it's great to have you back. . . Happy Birthday and remember, it's always what you do with the candles. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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