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Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-06-22 07:02 PM

Through nature I saw you
So vividly before my eyes
You were the early morning rays
As the sun began to rise

Were those your eyes I saw
In the clear blue mountain stream?
Of were you part of the beautiful rainbow
And all the colors in between?

I was aware of your velvety touch
In the warming Summer's breeze
I'm sure you were the flowers
That almost made me sneeze

I see you melt over the horizon
In the shape of the setting sun
Now I know that in nature's beauty
You will continue to live on

Suetang

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

1 posted 2001-06-22 07:09 PM

That's a sweet romantic verse you wrote.

Very nice.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-06-22 07:11 PM

SueTang~
Oh my goodness ... this is just LOVELY !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

3 posted 2001-06-22 08:52 PM

Thank you ladies, I'm glad you enjoyed this.
Take care......Sue

Suetang

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

4 posted 2001-06-22 11:13 PM

Sue: This is so pretty! Nature is such a source of solace, when we need it to be.

Betty Lou Hebert

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2001-06-22 11:44 PM

Sue.....loved this....saving this, so beautiful

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

6 posted 2001-06-23 05:55 PM

Betty Lou
I'm so pleased you read and enjoyed this one
Take care.......Sue

SEA
Thank you for your lovely words........Sue

Suetang

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

7 posted 2001-06-23 11:35 PM

Sue,

This is so pretty and has to certainly be a record for the shortest poem you've ever posted. LOL

Enjoyed it, my friend. (((hugs)))

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the human mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

8 posted 2001-06-23 11:38 PM

Sue-
wow...such a beautiful write!

i love this!

~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

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