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Open Poetry #14

My love

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-06-20 04:58 PM

My love walks alone on rainy nights,
longing to be with you.
It smiles when it's full of your touch.
It cradles in a small corner of you heart,
waiting to be loved.
It's broken every rule to be with you.
My love would do anything for you.
It's daring.
It's subtle.
It's simple.
It's complicated.
It's bigger than life, my love.

Fancy
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 189
TN/USA

1 posted 2001-06-20 05:26 PM

..."it's broken every rule to be with you"...such actions I have been quite quilty of...your sincerity leaps out from your words...lovely

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2001-06-21 07:05 AM

"My love walks alone on rainy nights longing to be with you." Wonderful expression of longing...James

BrightStar
Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 219

3 posted 2001-06-22 11:02 AM

*sigh*

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

4 posted 2001-06-23 11:00 PM

How did this little gem fall onto the back pages with only three replies? Loved it, Walker.

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the human mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2001-06-23 11:07 PM

walker-
simply beautiful...

enjoyed reading this..

~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

6 posted 2001-06-23 11:40 PM

I've broken every rule to be with you...can quite relate. Good one, walker!

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