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JLR
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0 posted 2001-06-23 01:36 AM


My Resolve


Growing restless
as the calm passes
my resolve
to maintain
without you
a degree of peace
a semblance of normalcy
my resolve
to maintain
still in love with you
a measure of distance
a façade of dignity
growing restless
I write of you, again


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SEA
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with you
1 posted 2001-06-23 02:04 AM


face this often......know it well. You wrote of the feelings perfectly   Hugs   ~SEA
Janet Marie
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2 posted 2001-06-23 02:16 AM


still in love with you
a measure of distance
a façade of dignity
growing restless
I write of you, again
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once again you write me...
my resolve ran out a long time ago...
me thinks its hanging out with my missing muse  
very cool poem JLR..succinct and sharp.
well done.

I'm going crazy, I'm losing sleep.
I'm in too far, I'm in way too deep over you.
You'll always be the one.
You were the first, you'll be the last.

Waseem Cheema
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3 posted 2001-06-23 02:25 AM


Same again ....Very nice JLR
gw-gal
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4 posted 2001-06-23 02:57 AM


enjoyed reading ,,, very nice
Fancy
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5 posted 2001-06-23 04:13 AM


...extrodinary, in my humble opinion...

"...don't ever stop loving, don't ever stop believing, don't ever stop dreaming your dreams..."
Warmly...
Fancy

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6 posted 2001-06-23 10:29 AM


just when you thought that they were gone. . .

well done JLR. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

OLIAS
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7 posted 2001-06-23 10:35 AM


As I have come to expect for your work you speak truth and volumes in every word, and this is no exception, well done poet.

Regards,
Olias.

Temptress
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8 posted 2001-06-23 06:01 PM


I know this well, and I love the way you write about it.  

walker
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9 posted 2001-06-23 06:19 PM


Very beautiful words,JLR,keep your dignity it's your treasure.
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