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JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

0 posted 2001-06-23 01:36 AM

My Resolve

Growing restless
as the calm passes
my resolve
to maintain
without you
a degree of peace
a semblance of normalcy
my resolve
to maintain
still in love with you
a measure of distance
a façade of dignity
growing restless
I write of you, again

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-06-23 02:04 AM

face this often......know it well. You wrote of the feelings perfectly

Hugs

~SEA

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2001-06-23 02:16 AM

still in love with you
a measure of distance
a façade of dignity
growing restless
I write of you, again
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once again you write me...
my resolve ran out a long time ago...
me thinks its hanging out with my missing muse

very cool poem JLR..succinct and sharp.
well done.

I'm going crazy, I'm losing sleep.
I'm in too far, I'm in way too deep over you.
You'll always be the one.
You were the first, you'll be the last.

Waseem Cheema
Member

since 2001-03-16

Posts 369
Pakistan

3 posted 2001-06-23 02:25 AM

Same again ....Very nice JLR

gw-gal
New Member

since 2001-06-23

Posts 2

4 posted 2001-06-23 02:57 AM

enjoyed reading ,,, very nice

Fancy
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 189
TN/USA

5 posted 2001-06-23 04:13 AM

...extrodinary, in my humble opinion...

"...don't ever stop loving, don't ever stop believing, don't ever stop dreaming your dreams..."
Warmly...
Fancy

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-06-23 10:29 AM

just when you thought that they were gone. . .

well done JLR. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

7 posted 2001-06-23 10:35 AM

As I have come to expect for your work you speak truth and volumes in every word, and this is no exception, well done poet.

Regards,
Olias.

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

8 posted 2001-06-23 06:01 PM

I know this well, and I love the way you write about it.

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

9 posted 2001-06-23 06:19 PM

Very beautiful words,JLR,keep your dignity it's your treasure.

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