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a little ‘Southern comfort’
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a little ‘Southern comfort’ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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‘Southern comfort’ represents much more, than just a brew... Those two words hold meaning that you’ll see, before we’re through... Speaking for the ladies from the North, the East, the West... a Southern man is well-endowed, in what we call ‘finesse’! You could search forever, and forever cyber-roam... But one sweet day you’ll realize, the prize awaits down home... There are no language barriers... You can afford the flights, to where he waits with open arms, to warm your Southern nights... From Arkansas to Tennessee, then south to Alabama... There’s Florida, and Georgia, not to mention Louisiana... The treasure lies within the states, of sultry Southern charms... It’s there that ‘Southern comfort’, can be found within his arms... You Southern men had best beware, a surge is on the rise... Of ladies looking for a man, with passion in his eyes... And how they need to hear that voice say: “Come on down, my dear”... “Just let me hold you close, and you can get your ‘comfort’ here”... The more I think about it, Southern charm is what we need... A slower pace for longing hearts, and time, which love can feed... And though we’ve come so very far, the treasure’s in the past... But can be had again, when Southern comfort’s ours, at last... The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Aha....the South SHALL rise again..... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
hi Decaflame... yes, I believe they will! Thank you my friend!!  The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Hi Sunny, Being a native of the deep South, I can assure you that Southern charm still exists. I loved your poem, my friend. It's good to see you posting again.  (((hugs)))Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
hi Michael... and it's good to know that Southern gentlemen are still charming...that's a tradition I would hate to see end! Thank you, my dear friend....it's good to post here when I can!! The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sunny- ah yes...i'm liking this alot! now, could you point one of those southern gentlemen in my direction? hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
hi Vicky! Ah, well....I would say that you are closer to the south than me!! LOL!!! You just need to scoot over a little more to the middle, and one will fall right in your lap!! Thank y'all..ya hear? The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Well, you've convinced me now what do I do! Just teasing  "This rose has seen red, I have been blue |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
packing my bags and moving south... |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Sunny Loved your verse - yes the Southern Gentlemen are the best. Glad to see you back on Passions. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
You just can't resist that Southern charm!! *Lone Wolf books a flight south*  All writing comes |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Ladies, ladies - you must listen! Don't book those flights quite yet! I've been trying to convince these men I'm as good as they will get. I beg you, don't spoil my chances Please, please, don't be interfering!! Give me a chance to find my love - A loud yeeeee-haaaaaaaaa you'll be hearing! LOL... Sorry, sunny... couldn't resist!! After all, I've been offering suthern comfort for ages (without success, but that's beside the point)! LOL. This is great! [This message has been edited by suthern (edited 06-25-2001).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Kathleen... Ah, yes...better hurry, I hear the tickets are going fast!! Sandra... Run...in line you go behind Kathleen...unless you have better connections!!! (Ha!) Ariana... Ok...when we all show up down there, can we stay at your place? Ha!! Lone Wolf... Off we go...into the wild blue yonder!! Scoot over..it's crowded on this flight!!!! suthern... hey...too cool....loved it, but you knew I would!!!!! Consider this one yours, my friend, and you get first dibs on the gentlemen!!! Ha!!! Thank you ladies... each and every one!! The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Sunny You bet you can stay with me even if I have to pitch a tent in the back yard. Love it! |
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