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rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
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0 posted 2001-06-22 04:50 PM

You

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Your precious dimples
Can melt me in a moment
I fall more in love

~*~

Your contagious laugh
Makes my heart smile softly
With gentle laughter

~*~

Your stunning smile
Shares the happiness you hold
Making life better

~*~

Your lovely brown eyes
Allows me to become lost
Deep within your love
~*~

Your soft caresses
Carry me to paradise
Souls entertwined

~*~

Your sweet tender soul
Offers me strength and knowledge
That I cherish so

~*~

Your delicate love
Protects, heals, soothes, and guides me
My heart overflows

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TaraB

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-06-22 06:46 PM

RP.....

beautifully done!!

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2001-06-22 06:52 PM

rosepetals-
these are really beautiful..

enjoyed reading them...they
made me smile..

~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

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3 posted 2001-06-22 06:57 PM

SEA - Thank you

I'm glad you liked them

Vicky - Awww

I'm glad they made you smile

Thanks for stopping to read them.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2001-06-23 01:51 PM

you must love someone
to write senryus like this
love overflowing

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
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5 posted 2001-06-23 06:28 PM

                   I do love someone
                 He is my inspiration
                  Always in my heart

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

6 posted 2001-06-24 11:48 AM

rostpetals...

i am glad i stopped to read this one..you must be really lucky to meet that special someone!

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

7 posted 2001-06-24 11:50 AM

Tara, these are so sweetly expressed

well done!~

Take care,
Melissa~

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

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8 posted 2001-06-24 05:12 PM

faterider - Thank you for stopping in! I'm happy you liked them

Melissa - I'm glad you enjoyed.. thanks for stopping in to read

VAS
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since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

9 posted 2001-06-24 05:28 PM

RP, it's like your dropping your lovely gently down the page, one rose petal at a time

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2001-06-24 06:01 PM

ENJOY

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

11 posted 2001-06-24 06:03 PM

IT must be love
Very lovely poem
Liz

rosepetals25

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12 posted 2001-06-24 06:40 PM

Vas - *sighs* Now THAT is a reply

vandana - Oh believe me I am.. every angel blessedd day

Elizabeth - I am always so amazed when you compliment my poems.

Thank you for stopping in.

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 06-24-2001).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

13 posted 2002-02-07 06:05 PM

You are my dear friend
With a heart of a red rose
Delicate and sheer

(big hugggsssssss) Ooohhhhhhh...this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, your lovely words always make me sigh! (kiss on cheek) May he always bring a smile to your heart and give you eternal love, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

14 posted 2002-02-13 04:29 PM

awww tara! Im glad I ventured into the archives and found this! Soo pretty!
(hugs)

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