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Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

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lost in blue pages

0 posted 2001-06-11 03:16 PM

Humming a Melody

Humming a melody
upon a stream of love
merge inside sweet dreams
of love that flows above
join these shades of bliss
found in heavenly sighs
where evening rose will be
gentle touched of angel’s kiss

Humming a melody
upon a stream of joy
honey this will be
sensual touch of lovin' mind
played our song with harmony
drown between these lines

Humming a melody
upon a stream of silky roses
petals of seductive love
guides gentle waves of passions
tortured willingly, giving my whole
discover height on tender emotions
as I flow racy through your veins
passionate rhythm of heartbeat

Charisma
~*TMP*~
20/05/01

Mr»ÄlleÿÇät
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since 2001-06-02

Posts 190

1 posted 2001-06-11 03:31 PM

Oh MY,
I have to go get a cold one after that. Good poem, brought out all kinds of feelings

Thank You
Mr»ÄlleÿÇät

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

2 posted 2001-06-11 03:41 PM

Charisma, lovely poem.

"Build a man a fire, he'll be warm for a day. Set a man on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life". Terry Pratchett

Elizabeth

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since 1999-06-07

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3 posted 2001-06-11 04:48 PM

How beautiful!

Tovi
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since 2001-06-05

Posts 168

4 posted 2001-06-11 05:52 PM

Applauds!!!!!! I loved the way you've worded this. You reached deep into the emotion and brought it forth beautifully.

My compliments, Charisma!

Not only to say the right thing in the right place, but far more difficult, to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2001-06-11 05:57 PM

Charisma,
Well said, enjoyed the read.

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

6 posted 2001-06-11 06:01 PM

Such lovely humming in your sweet poem

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-06-11 06:07 PM

wow. . . now this has fire in it. . . but you hide it so well. . . great job. . .

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Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

8 posted 2001-06-12 06:59 AM

[b]
Mr»ÄlleÿÇät: thank you for your nice comment, sorry that I'd caused the need for a cold one.

brian madden:thank you for the lovely

Elizabeth: thank you so much for the bautiful

Tovi:Glad that you loved reading this one, and thank you for the compliment and lovely comment.

Seymour Tabin: So glad that you enjoyed the read

Titia Geertman:Glad you enjoyed the sweet humming within.

Sven: like some smoldering fire huh

....always there, but not always visable...

Glad you liked it my friend.,

[This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 06-12-2001).]

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2002-02-07 05:44 PM

(sigh) Soooooooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always hum with the symphony of love and passion! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

10 posted 2002-02-13 04:32 PM

humming along with you deary!

I found this lovely piece buried in the archives. Loved it

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