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Mother Nature’s Tortured Soul
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Mother Nature’s Tortured Soul |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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Mother Nature’s Tortured Soul Trees sway in a lonely frenzied dance Howling wind is the music that plays Gray clouds roll with stunning force You can see the heaviness collecting Before the sky’s tears begin to fall The ground’s surface accepts the blame Absorbing the tears as they descend. Thunder rolls, echoing its angry protests. Lightening flashes, electric neon warnings Rage exposed as the elements expel The enraged demons that seem to haunt Mother nature’s tortured soul. TaraB |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
RP~ I love this! Such a vivid description  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I like this. . .I've never thought of Mother Nature as tortured. . . but, you make me see that side. . . great job. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes descriptive and an interesting perspective.. enjoyed! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Don't fool Mother Nature |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
SEA - Thank you! I'm glad you liked it Sven - If you would see the storms we are having here... you would understand the title! lol Mother Nature is NOT a happy camper today! Thanks for dropping in  Cpat Hair - I'm glad you enjoyed  Interloper - You are definately right Thanks for stopping in.[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 06-22-2001).] |
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