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Zinsser
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0 posted 2001-06-21 10:14 AM



Moment In Time

The candle wax runs down its holder
Flickering flame shines on your sholder
Cherish these times as I grow older
Perfect time to grow bolder

By
Connie McDonald
June 20, 2001

© Copyright 2001 Connie McDonald - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-06-21 10:17 AM


This leaves a welcome, and knowing, smile....
Zinsser
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2 posted 2001-06-21 02:24 PM


Sunshine

it does dosn't it

LOL

Thanks

Cpat Hair
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3 posted 2001-06-22 08:44 AM


must have missed this one yesterday... now ther is a short simple image that says so much.. enjoyed!!!
Zinsser
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4 posted 2001-06-22 09:42 AM


Cpat
Thank You
I'm brain dead right now
Its early in Calif
Need Coffee
But I do Thank You
Connie

Titia Geertman
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5 posted 2001-06-22 01:40 PM


WOW do I like this beautiful poem


Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

Fancy
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6 posted 2001-06-22 01:47 PM


...a picture of a Perfect Moment In Time to be etched on one's heart forever...lovely...
Fancy

MARK V SHELDON
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7 posted 2001-06-22 02:32 PM


Connie, I'm really enjoying your poetic style.  Time is a fascinating thing, isn't it?

-MVS

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear;  few can listen."

Gentle Spirit
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8 posted 2001-06-22 02:36 PM


Connie, short and sweet, but it delivers it's message well.  Nicely done.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Zinsser
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9 posted 2001-06-22 05:10 PM


Titia: Thank You sooo much
        Love the clapping

Fancy: Thank You... If we look
       with better eyes, we have many
       Perfect Moments

Mark: Thank You..Yes time is a fascinating
      thing

Gentle Spirit: Thank You... I'm so happy
               you liked this...

To All of you: You have NO Idea how much
               this means to me.... I mean it
               From My Heart
               Thanks
               Connie

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